My Dearest Angel,1
I am sorry to say this; well actually, I am not. You really hurt me! But I guess you don’t care. It’s my fault anyways. I fell for you, believed your lies. But my Angel, there are other Angels, ones you have betrayed. And guess what, they are coming for you. And I shan’t stop them. 2
My Sparkling Angel, why did you hurt me? What you felt for me, what you wanted from me, although I didn’t know at the time, was wrong. You had no right to think or feel any of that! Why were you so spiteful? I did nothing! 3
My Fallen Angel, from the start you deceived me. You made me dream and said they would come true, but they didn’t! You lied! You broke every promise. Your broke my heart. But it’s you who is missing out. I only regret believing you. 4
You have no excuse, my Angel. So don’t even try.5
Author notes
I am not sure if it is finnished (I know that sounds really dumb, but I am tired and in no state to read through it. Unfortunatly.
The song i based it on is called Angels by Within Temptation. It is a pretty cool song. You should listen to it.
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Comments
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Reads a bit like the music video (the story of it, I mean). Very well, fits the song and is a good read on its own too =) Well written and cleverly neutral in not giving away too much of what is really going on =)
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 5.
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oh camilleeee, within temptation is such a good band.
this was really good, quite emotional and personal in a way. awesome work! <3
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