I knew what she was the moment I saw her, but I didn’t care. It’d been three months since my last lay and I would stick my dick into a bowl of soup for pleasure as it were. So as she approached me, I licked her up and down with my eyes and she tasted wonderful. Sharp blue eyes contrasted with her deathly pale skin. Her brown hair cascaded down the sides of her face and a couple hairs lashed her lips tantalizingly. The leather shirt covered her neck, but opened beneath into a V that cut into the cleavage of her bursting bosom. She wore gloves that spanned her forearms to just past her elbows, leaving the rest of the way to her shoulder exposed.1
Her pants were pulled tight to her legs, leaving nothing to the imagination as to their shape. Laces spanned both the outer and inner seams, leaving gaps of milky lust for the imagination to toy with. The inner seam rode all the way up into the inner thigh. Through those gaps I could see her boots came up to her knees. 2
She came up to sit next to me. Just before she sat down I pulled the stool closer, and motioned for her to sit. She would have all the control soon enough, I wanted to steal a little bit for now. 3
“Hello sexy,” she said in that Eastern European accent. It drove me wild.4
“The same to you. You,” I paused, eyeing her up and down once more. I couldn’t wait to dig into her, no matter the consequences, “are stunning.”5
She brushed her hands boldly across my chest and down my stomach, stopping just before the waistline. “You’re not so bad yourself… I’m in room six. Come.” I came. I told you she would have control soon.6
* * *7
She wasted no time when we got in the room. Before the door closed behind us she had my shirt ripped open and was trailing her fingers down my happy trail before coming to a stop on my belt. I felt my manhood press against my jeans in a jolt of excitement. “You just ripped my best shirt!” I told her jokingly. She never paused in her movement. 8
“I guess I’ll have to make it up to you then won’t I?” My belt was undone and my zipper pulled down. She rubbed me through my boxers with her hand as she came up and kissed me hotly on my neck. I let my head back, exposing my neck dangerously as her fingers worked magic. She knew how to please me. “How about…” Before her accent reached my ears she lowered herself and her mouth enveloped me. I moaned loudly as she worked her magic. Deciding this was much better than staying at home with a can of chicken noodle, but just as embarrassing, I made it. 9
“Mmm, that was quick.” She said rising back up to my level. 10
“It’s been awhile.”11
“I noticed, but don’t worry… the wait will have been worth it.” She shoved me onto the firm hotel mattress. I landed with a bounce and slid myself back, resting my head against the recently fluffed pillows. “Shall I keep my boots on for you?” 12
I nodded. Eager is what she wanted, so eager is what she got.13
“Excellent.” The word just rolled off her tongue like magic, the accent hitting me like a whip. Instantly I was ready for her again. This time she made me wait. Slowly she removed the laces off of her pants, starting at the hips and working her way down. The gaps in the laces hinted at shapely goodness, but as she lowered her pants I realized they didn’t pay her proper homage. Her legs were the best I’d ever seen, shapely, smooth, and milky. She kept her top on, but I didn’t mind. Her leather boots rubbed against my legs as she crawled towards me.14
“Ready again are we?” Her nails slid down my chest as she got into position, lowering herself onto me. I slid in without a problem. She was perfectly wet and willing. Slowly she moved, up and down as I rubbed her body. It wasn’t long before the waves of her first orgasm began to roll through her. I grabbed her hips and forced myself in deep, pulling her down on top of me as I thrust into her.15
As she came out of her ecstasy, she dropped down on top of me, sliding just my tip in and out of her teasingly. I wanted to just keep pounding her; the change in tempo was killing me. “You want to fuck me hard don’t you?” her breath hot against my ear. She kissed my neck and slid herself fully onto me, pushing me deep. I let my head back, moaning in the warmth and wetness.16
Her bite pierced the exposed skin of my neck. I felt the two sharp fangs digging into the main arteries as she began to suck in my blood. It felt wonderful! I moaned and pressed my neck against her, reaching out to her hips and pulling her down on top of me. The orgasm hit me but did not end in a rush like usual. I felt myself pumping into her everything I had as I kept sliding in and out. 17
She bit down harder as she slammed her body down onto me. I could feel her teeth digging in, filling me with ecstasy. The orgasm never ended as I felt more and more blood flow out of my body. I began to pray as I never had before, praying that I could die slowly and enjoy every last moment of this. For several minutes this went on, till my rod pumped from an empty tank. Still she sucked down on me and rode me.18
The last thing I saw was her blue eyes sparkling in the darkness and my red blood dripping from her teeth as she gave me one kiss on the lips. “You knew what I was.”19
“And I loved every bit of it.” I whispered before my body went limp.20
Her pants were pulled tight to her legs, leaving nothing to the imagination as to their shape. Laces spanned both the outer and inner seams, leaving gaps of milky lust for the imagination to toy with. The inner seam rode all the way up into the inner thigh. Through those gaps I could see her boots came up to her knees. 2
She came up to sit next to me. Just before she sat down I pulled the stool closer, and motioned for her to sit. She would have all the control soon enough, I wanted to steal a little bit for now. 3
“Hello sexy,” she said in that Eastern European accent. It drove me wild.4
“The same to you. You,” I paused, eyeing her up and down once more. I couldn’t wait to dig into her, no matter the consequences, “are stunning.”5
She brushed her hands boldly across my chest and down my stomach, stopping just before the waistline. “You’re not so bad yourself… I’m in room six. Come.” I came. I told you she would have control soon.6
* * *7
She wasted no time when we got in the room. Before the door closed behind us she had my shirt ripped open and was trailing her fingers down my happy trail before coming to a stop on my belt. I felt my manhood press against my jeans in a jolt of excitement. “You just ripped my best shirt!” I told her jokingly. She never paused in her movement. 8
“I guess I’ll have to make it up to you then won’t I?” My belt was undone and my zipper pulled down. She rubbed me through my boxers with her hand as she came up and kissed me hotly on my neck. I let my head back, exposing my neck dangerously as her fingers worked magic. She knew how to please me. “How about…” Before her accent reached my ears she lowered herself and her mouth enveloped me. I moaned loudly as she worked her magic. Deciding this was much better than staying at home with a can of chicken noodle, but just as embarrassing, I made it. 9
“Mmm, that was quick.” She said rising back up to my level. 10
“It’s been awhile.”11
“I noticed, but don’t worry… the wait will have been worth it.” She shoved me onto the firm hotel mattress. I landed with a bounce and slid myself back, resting my head against the recently fluffed pillows. “Shall I keep my boots on for you?” 12
I nodded. Eager is what she wanted, so eager is what she got.13
“Excellent.” The word just rolled off her tongue like magic, the accent hitting me like a whip. Instantly I was ready for her again. This time she made me wait. Slowly she removed the laces off of her pants, starting at the hips and working her way down. The gaps in the laces hinted at shapely goodness, but as she lowered her pants I realized they didn’t pay her proper homage. Her legs were the best I’d ever seen, shapely, smooth, and milky. She kept her top on, but I didn’t mind. Her leather boots rubbed against my legs as she crawled towards me.14
“Ready again are we?” Her nails slid down my chest as she got into position, lowering herself onto me. I slid in without a problem. She was perfectly wet and willing. Slowly she moved, up and down as I rubbed her body. It wasn’t long before the waves of her first orgasm began to roll through her. I grabbed her hips and forced myself in deep, pulling her down on top of me as I thrust into her.15
As she came out of her ecstasy, she dropped down on top of me, sliding just my tip in and out of her teasingly. I wanted to just keep pounding her; the change in tempo was killing me. “You want to fuck me hard don’t you?” her breath hot against my ear. She kissed my neck and slid herself fully onto me, pushing me deep. I let my head back, moaning in the warmth and wetness.16
Her bite pierced the exposed skin of my neck. I felt the two sharp fangs digging into the main arteries as she began to suck in my blood. It felt wonderful! I moaned and pressed my neck against her, reaching out to her hips and pulling her down on top of me. The orgasm hit me but did not end in a rush like usual. I felt myself pumping into her everything I had as I kept sliding in and out. 17
She bit down harder as she slammed her body down onto me. I could feel her teeth digging in, filling me with ecstasy. The orgasm never ended as I felt more and more blood flow out of my body. I began to pray as I never had before, praying that I could die slowly and enjoy every last moment of this. For several minutes this went on, till my rod pumped from an empty tank. Still she sucked down on me and rode me.18
The last thing I saw was her blue eyes sparkling in the darkness and my red blood dripping from her teeth as she gave me one kiss on the lips. “You knew what I was.”19
“And I loved every bit of it.” I whispered before my body went limp.20
Author notes
This is a story inspired by a song, the interesting point of view in the song was enjoying the time with a vampire and wanting it to not end.
A contest entry
- Some Hot and Steamy Stuff by Upon Deaths Meeting.
100 points, ended December 24, 2007, 5 entries
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Does this qualify as a valid Erotica?
Comments
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great style of storytelling love it. But in your next story i would like to see a bigger plot, your style will really be enjoyable in novel writing
beginning: 4, language: 2, plot: 1, ending: 3, characters: 4.
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This was hot and flawless. You have talent. Keep writing and keep using that talent, I would hate to see it go to waste!

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Woah...
Yeah, it qualifies as erotica. You did a GREAT job with this story. I've never seen the 'bleeding orgasm' technique used in a vampire story, and you pulled it off quite well. It was VERY clean grammar and spelling wise. I don't think I even caught any mistakes.
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o0o0o00o00o0o0o0o0o wow wat a awsum vampire story mixed with erotica is jus GREAT ! lol newhoo the detail used was great, the whole thing was well worded and awsum. u pulled me in from the 1st line and it was jus gr8 ^_^ thanks for entering and gud luck!
bumble bee xox

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muahahahaha! this is the best vampire story i have read in ages. man, ive always had a thing for vampire stories, but after being dissapointed by typical, cliched nonsense so many times, ive avoided any story on this subject alltogether. what a happy accident that i stumbled across this incredibly fun, hot and sexy, unique, and dark story. i love the detail, its rich, and paints a very clear picture for me, always the mark of a great writer. lol, and i adored how he knew, and chose to go along anyway, how he knew, and wanted his very death to last longer, so keen was his pleasure. fabulous, simply gorgeous. thank you.
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Not exactly what I like to read but still well written. Well done
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Ooooh wow that was sexy. The description and language used was perfect. This was filthly and erotica at its best. Great job.

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This was really good and very descriptive. I would definitely count it as erotica. It was sexy but didn't just focus on the sex, with a very good storyline to go with it. I loved the ending. I think that this was a very unique short story.


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well i like it
i dont know what erotica is but i loved the story line
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