Essence of a Blue Eyed Girl

I am myself. I am who you need and want me to be. I will be true to everyone and no one because no honor do I owe. I want to be everything I never thought possible and everything that's never been. I used to be just a girl. Now I'm a poet, I have thoughts. I have permission to be deep. I let go of the things that haunt me, but they will always lurk around dark corners. I've forgotten how to be an affectionate friend. I remember the small details of every torrid affair. I've become the fragile cracks on my used heart. I'm healing, I'm broken. I'm honest, I'm a liar. I'm ashamed and yet, I care not what you think of me. I'm a virgin with tainted skin. I'm a sinner. Do not hate the sinner, hate the sin. I'm romantic and lucid and dark and morbid. I'm sad and lonely and fulfilled. I can be submissive and assertive. I'm a mystery. A puzzle with no answer. I am poetry, I write for myself. I write for you. I am what you'll always be ...1

Who are you?2

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Another writing 'practice' to help explore who you are. Of course, there is no right or wrong answer. She actually suggested that you go on for pages and pages but I just felt like ending here. Enjoy, but then again this is more personal than for anyone else.

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  • -Reality-
    October 19, 2004
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    Wooow, I love this. It's great!!! Ahhh.. I really like this piece, monologues and dialogues are my favorite kinds of things. You described yourself wonderfully. . Great job!!

    Kami

  • AdequateSuspicions
    October 14, 2004
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    la la

    *does yum yum dance wit erin* THATS MY DANCE!!! I cant wait for saturday and my beloved sam, well I want to bum points but I have nothing else to sya, except I love you, and if erin doesnt get to you before I do, I shall keep you in my basement, with the pool table and occasionaly muffins, you can never tell, Have to go, see ya later honey.... BYEYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    OH BTW I loved this piece, and it inspires me to write of my own personal things... yeah BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE bye


  • RuthArabellaTrasher
    October 13, 2004
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    Hot damn, that was 7 points...rawr! \m/ FUNKY TOWEL!!!! *does the yum yum dance*

  • RuthArabellaTrasher
    October 13, 2004
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    Wowzers. This shit's deep, dude. I adore it. It's so you. Those practices are bad-A. New phrase. Davey got me stuck on it. Damn the bastard! LoL, talk at'cha later...

    ...that is, if the Apocalypse hasn't come...
    ...or if Chris kidnaps me in the night and keeps me in his basement as his sex slave....

    ...or if DAVID kidnaps me out of...his love for special brownies...

    ....Yes, I am just bumming point off ya. Yeah, yeah, yeah, I know, "Bugger off!"

    Fern

  • Miss Faerie
    October 10, 2004
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    interesting. a really good idea of finding out who u r. its a good theory and i mite try it sometime lol

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