Hope

So hard to live,1

When everything is being ripped apart,2

when there is no hope,3

no wish,4

nothing.5

You just sit there,6

thinking, thinking.7

No hope induicates no life.8

A world without hope is nothing. 9

When life brings you hope you just throw it away.10

You don't listen to your concience,11

You don't listen to your heart either,12

You do what others tell you.13

Is that a life worth living?14

Your there,15

But at the same time your not.16

You look at yourself from a diffrent angle.17

An angle were you see your not the best.18

Your not the worst either,19

But you don't like yourself anymore.20

You keep telling yourself your ugly.21

That everybody around you is for buetifull than you.22

You lose hope.23

Is that a life worth living?24

Think about yourself?25

Is there a way to improve?26

A way to make others happy but at the same time make you happy also?

Author notes


This is my first poem. It's not that good but plz give me comments! I really want to know what you think about my story! Thank you very much!

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