It’s been ten years since he last spoke what he really felt. The family gatherings were ok, a little tense at times, but ok.1
He often left the house in a rage causing his parents to cringe when he would call or visit.2
He had tried counseling to help with his anger. Then he tried church and god. Who knew lies could comfort the lost soul; and when he found the truth he could no longer find comfort in their god.3
His search for peace of mind, a soul at peace, has left him thirsty for love. All he wanted was for his father to accept him, to be proud of him.4
At night for the past two months he has stood under the tree he used to climb as a child, across from his parents bedroom. Simply staring at the darkened window. When he feels it is time to go for the night he heaves a sigh, and taking one last look whispers, “I’m sorry.”
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guess whats wrong and i'll tell you if you're right
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Umm... he is gay and they dont accept him? i dont know. (that was not meant to offend anyone, but i just thought i'd give it a go. lol)
This was really good. mysterious and suspenseful... loved it.
I want to know what happened! lol.
I didn't really see any errors at all so that was great because you wouldn't want to distract anyone from the awesome plot and story.
oh wait, the title says "remores" ... it should be "remorse."
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Congratulations you win !!!! you got it right he's gay
thank you for the compliment, i haven't written anything further with this story but i might go back and do something with it
thanks for letting me know about the title i'll fix it
thanks for the comments they are always nice -
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sweet, haha. i thought it was probably it. XD
no worries, keep it up!
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lmao I like dottie's guess its amusing
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He killed his parents in a blind rage, then himself and now he is a ghost who comes nightly to look at the tree?
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