Why can't I be unbreakable?1
This unknown answer still doesn't seem to be found.2
So I'll just have to deal with the torture,3
and the misery that doesn't seem to vanish.4
Why can't I be unbreakable?
Author notes
It's not done.
I don't really right stuff like this much, but when I finish it, I'll post it on AP.
In a list
A contest entry
- A Third Poetry Contest by Melissa Loves Jeffy.
175 points, ended December 30, 2007, 23 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what you think please
Comments
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If only all of us could be unbreakable. life would be so much easier to handle that way. Great write!!! Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!!
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*thinks* Maybe this is good all by it's self. I think it should be done. I don't know but I'll have to see. Comment on me more!!!!(kidding)
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It has great potential I can not wait to read the finish work.
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good
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It's okay
It's good but it could be better. -
This is a great story. Still a little short, but it makes a solid point. Good job.
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Its a very good start, at the moment its a little short to get a good picture from.
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