Mystery Story part 1; Molly and Me

"Oh my god Molly, for the billionth time, he is not HOT!" I shouted in my friend's face. "Oh, sorry. . " she said looking offended although I knew she wasn't. "I'm so excited, the guy i could never get to like me in seventh grade, is now head over heels for me! I've had a first kiss and everything! Don't you know what that's like?" "Not really." I said. " My love life is very uneventful." I sighed with enthusiasm, and Molly laughed. My friend, actually best friend Molly and I were really tight, and we both had odd sences of humor that seemed to fit together perfectly. We were a great team. On our way to Art class, Betsy stopped us. "HI GUYS!" she practically spit in our faces, "WHAT'S UP?" "Nothin" Molly and I said in a monotone. " Well, then, BYE YOU GUYS!" she said again, and she almost bounced away on a sugar high, into the Spanish room. "That kid is so annoying!" I yelled once she was out of reach. "You like her?" "Not at all," Molly said. "She annoys me, Kathryn." "Ditto," I replied. 1

Once in the Art room, Mr. Bluehere was explaining the next project, and he suddenly, without looking up shouted," John, get out from beind the door!" "oh, fine." came a small voice. Out from the door came John Slugg. Ugg. . . I HATE that kid. I can't believe that HE possibly made it to Harvard with the rest of us. 2

(In my class, a lot of my seventh grade buddies, and apparently enemies, rose up and got into little ole Harvard. . wow that was a shocker. Soooooo.... back to the story.)3

The rest of Art class was just a blur. . . Molly raced out of class, and she couldn't wait to meet Ben, her new bf. Little did she know that she'd treasure him even more if he, you know, died.4

(dun dun)5

Molly and I walked into the local McDonalds, and we were both happy to see Kim at the counter. She was also a seventh-grade-harvard-buddy. "Howdy, what can I get for you?" she asked. "I'll have a McFlurry." I said. After all they were only 50 cents, and they tasted AWESOME. "I'll have a soda, fries, a double cheese burger with mustard, no katchup, and chicken nuggets. . " "Molly, this is not lunch, or dinner for that matter." I pointed out. "Oh fine. . Kim, no chicken nuggets then please," She answered. Kim looked down into to the little ordering screen, and pushed some buttons, and then stared at us again. " Molly, have you seen the calories in those things?" I shoved a nutrition facts label in her face. She took one look and gasped. "OMG. Maybe just the soda would be good." "Ok, is thar your final answer?" Kim challenged. "Yep" Molly said. 6

"Oh, Kim, is Ben here?" Molly asked tentitively. "Maybe" Kim toyed with the knowledge. "I know you know, tell me!" Molly shouted with excitement.7

"Oh, fine he's in the back," Kim gave up. "BEN?" Molly yelled. "Right here babe," Ben called. And out from behind the counter stepped Ben, probably the best looking guy in our class at Harvard. But, I didn't want to think about that, I liked him, and then was rejected, I couldn't fall for him again. OK, Kathryn, be calm, i told myself. 8

Ben and Molly hugged and then walked into the back of the room to a closet they liked to call "secrets" and they bothed stepped in. Now this sounds like a slow-mo, but it was really quite fast. Once they were both in, Ben closed the door, and god only knows what happened after that in the little closet of "secrets". Yuck. 9

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  • EXXotic
    December 25, 2007
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    One thing......... Where is the mystery ?!?


    • LuckyBlackCat
      December 26, 2007
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      the mystery starts in the 4th one, which hasn't come out yet. . . . . my friends at school and i made this up, and got so far into the details, that the mystery is only just strting in the 4th one. . . yes, call us pathetic if you want. . .


  • DeadlyTurnip
    December 16, 2007

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    um...am i in this? lol. Leigh is Molly (coincidence? plz?) You're the narrator, Sam is Ben? Maybe? idk. if i'm in this, i'm probably Kim. idk who else that would be.

    • LuckyBlackCat
      December 16, 2007
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      i'll add a character for you if you want. . . .pick your name sam is ben, and leigh is molly. Kim is debra regensburger, loooooooooong story

      • DeadlyTurnip
        December 18, 2007
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        i know the story already trust me. so...can you put me in as Heart? u can say weird stuff about my name if you want, i don't care.

  • BonaFidePoet
    November 22, 2007
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    oh geezzzzz.... am i betsy?!?!?! arg


    • LuckyBlackCat
      November 25, 2007
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      noooooooo. . .betsy is molly holden, leigh and i ran into her one day before art one day.


  • StarIlluminated
    November 18, 2007

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    ok yeah that was kind of wierd..harvard 7th grade? whaaaa? ok, the funniest thing was prolly mr bluehere yeahhh, still really cunfuddling though...even though I prolly shouldn't be able to get half of it.

    • LuckyBlackCat
      November 18, 2007
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      by harvard seventh grade, i meant not that harvard now had seventh grade, but that some of our friends from ecms got suddenly smart, and after we all went to college together out of coincedence. and ask leigh about some of the funny parts, we mad them up together. *smile*
      ~kathryn


  • TwilightWolf
    November 17, 2007

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    i loved it oved it loved it loved loved loved lovd loved loved loved loved loved loved loced loved wwewweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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