Everything Right Done Wrong: Everything Wrong Done Right

Tonight, we discussed the future. Where we  see ourselves in several years from now. When this small town becomes larger, and we can't recognize it anymore. When Lenoir City will just dissolve into grandfather's stories and Loudon will be nothing more than just an ancient musing. What then? When we've all grown and moved away? What then...1

         Honestly, my future seems like a stab in the dark. We had it all planned out, you know. We'd go to college together, be roomies. Go through rough times, and be there for each other. We'd tackle such obstacles as exams, boyfriends, and frightening experiments with hair dye. Stay up late, discuss philosophies and our points of view. We'd have our own band. You'd be the guitar player, back up singer, I'd be back up guitar and vocalist. Ha...we even thought of names for the thing, and our album names.2

         Geez, it just seemed like it would last forever. Thick as thieves. Best friends. Hell, we were practically sisters. And I remember you told me once that some of the closest relationships you've had, you end up "all 'I hate you' ".3

         So what made me think this time would be different? 4

         I shouldn't have counted on you. For the future.5

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  • RuthArabellaTrasher
    October 7, 2004
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    Lenoir City is a small town in Tennessee. Yes, Andi and I have had a bit of a disagreement, and she wanted to break it off. No hard feelings or anything, but I can't just break something off and not "feel", not that Andi doesn't feel, and even though it may have partly been my fault. We shan't get into that, though. I'm surprised she hasn't talked to you. *shrug* Oh, well. I'll see if I can dig up some info on her.


  • Dean
    October 7, 2004
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    Oh Shit. I just reread your story. Its so sad, its about you and Andi, isn't it?

  • Dean
    October 7, 2004
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    Oh. Lol. Lenoir City is where now? I don't mean to be nosey, but did ya'll had a fight? Cause I thought ya'll were basically digesting through the same stomach or something. I haven't talked to her in, Geez, months.

  • RuthArabellaTrasher
    October 7, 2004
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    Nope, Loudon is a county just outside of Lenoir City, where I live. I cannot tell you why Andi is not writing. We have stopped communicating...
    Anyway, to answer your other question, this is just an "acoustic" musing. LoL, I like that word.

  • Dean
    October 7, 2004
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    Wow. This is very raw, though I don't recognize some of the names you put into it. Did you mean London? Why isn't Andi writing nowadays? Where'd she go. This is assuming you are indeed her keeper. But, in aspect for this story, is it the beginning of some big, regal tale, or just an honest acoustic musing like the feeling it gives off?

  • Miss Faerie
    October 7, 2004
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    Oh wow thats fucked. I kinda noe the feeling and it sux. This shows emotion and feeling. I think uve written from the heart.
    Good write

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