The feeling of riding a horse is unexplainable. There is nothing else on earth that gives you that feeling that you are free but safe and having fun in a disciplined way.1
Just sitting tall up on the horses back looking at the grounds around you wondering if your horse can cover them all in one go, there is only one solution to find out if it can cover them all and that is by giving it a go. 2
Just letting your horse free is the best feeling a person could have, its unexplainable because it is hardly imaginable but it does happen and when it does nothing else exists around you, it’s a moment just between a girl and a guy, a mother and child, a child’s face when they open their presents or something new changes their life, when a person gets their first real kiss, or wins a trophy, you are speechless but want to tell the world about your feeling but cant, cant because its unexplainable because its hardly imaginable. 3
When a horse lets everything go controllably, their ears prick up, their coat shines to the sun that’s only on them at that very moment, they stretch out all of their legs reaching for the next piece of grass that will help them carry on for longer, you can hear them puffing but it is actually them wanting more, they want to take you for a ride! They grab the bit and take off, there is nothing you can do but if there was you wouldn’t do it anyway! 4
Your horse is taking you for a ride, you have no control at all, alls you have is your best friend and open fields that are waiting to be discovered. You want to go faster and never stop, just carry on forever and never go back, you want to discover all the lands that are out in this world and tell everyone about your adventures, you want it to be you, your best friend, and the lands that surrounded this earth to go on forever. 5
BUT..6
You don’t want to let your horse get tired, he doesn’t want to stop but you have to, as soon as you pull on those reins your moment has gone, never to experience one again until you, your best friend and the fields make another time to meet. 7
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Comments
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That's nice. Good and short. I liked that. Well Done
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That's good. Well donbe
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Interesting... I really liked the explanation about riding a horse. You really described it really well... My only negative is that it didn't evoke the kind of emotions I am looking to get out of the story... Nothing at all against the write, just my personality.. lol great work and good luck..
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Awesome
this is....excellent
it is...in-describable. it just WORKS
=D nice work
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This is the feeling i think every horse rider gets when their best friend and the fields meet each other. When its a beautiful day, sun shinning and the perfect temperature, this is the feeling i get and hope i put it into words that people can relate too and feel like they are riding as well. caz xx
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