Mother! - First Line

I couldn't remember the last time that I had been so shocked.
Did my mother really just call him a 'fucking wank-stain'?
I didn't even think she knew the words.
And in front of his congregation too?1

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For 'First Line' contest - there is no real story behind this. Yet.

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  • Bitter Irony
    November 29, 2007

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    Nice! Hilarious, with a specific tone and quite a few surprises (the last line!) for something so short. I would certainly read more!

    Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!

    ~Bitter Irony


  • Redtearstains
    November 25, 2007

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    HAHAHAHA. That was too funny. Amazing short here. You actually have to make a story out of this. You can't ket it go to waste. Nicely done!