With a single kiss, electricity surged throughout both our beings as I tangled my hands in his hair to bring him closer. Jacob let out a low groan, and I was still half-afraid he would push me away in disgust. 1
Breaking the contact for a moment, I whispered, "Let me lock the door." He nodded, and deftly I moved to the door and turned the lock. When I turned back around, Jacob was sitting on his bed. I sat beside him, and looked into those incredible eyes of his. 2
"...eclipses," I murmured softly, "they look like eclipses."3
He looked confused. "What look like eclipses?" I smiled and reached up to his face. "Your eyes..." and I moved to claim his mouth once more.4
Jacob's mouth was hot on my skin as he pressed me back into the pillows. I arched my back to his touch, his lips roaming my all too willing body. Again firmly twisting his hair in my fingers, I pulled gently, caressing his scalp.5
"You're incredible," Jacob half groaned as he slid his hand into my bra and began slowly kneading my breasts. I pressed further into his touch, and sat up. Nimbly I unbuttoned his shirt, pulling it roughly from his shoulders. In the same moment, he moved to relieve me of my tank. My full breasts fairly fell into his fingers, and, half naked, I fell back onto the bed, heart racing.6
His hands began to roam my flesh, brushing first his thumb, then his lips over my swollen pink buds. 7
"Oh god," I let a breathy moan escape me, "yes." And in that moment I gave myself over completely. I had waited for this, pined for the moment when I would finally have Jacob all to myself, and this was that moment. It was my night. 8
As Jacob leaned down, scattering kisses along my jawline and onto my neck, impulsively I whispered into his ear, "I love you Jacob, je t'adore," and broke off into a sigh. Abruptly, he looked me dead in the eye. "Do you mean it?" he demanded quietly. Breathlessly I nodded, praying he wouldn't stop.9
"I love you too," he replied, just before he slanted his mouth across mine in a searing kiss. I clung to him, uttering a mewling noise low in my throat that only seemed to spark his interest further.10
Before I knew it, my skirt was lying beside my discarded shirt and shoes on Jacob's jute rug. I didn't miss it in the least. Anything that separated us was merely another distraction. And I wasn't allowing any more distraction. He took extra care with me from this point out. His featherlight caresses and lingering kisses made my head spin. Slowly, and not without the utmost of affection, Jacob leaned down and hooked his thumbs under the sides of my underwear and teasingly brought them down to my feet. 11
Once divested of every stitch of clothing, I sat up and ran my finger down Jacob's jaw. Seductively, I whispered, "You know, it isn't any fun to be the only one naked."12
He grinned, and replied roguishly, "I suppose you can help remedy that?" 13
Our eyes were trained on nothing but each other. Jacob moved himself over me carefully, as if I was a china doll he was reluctant to break. I was almost crazy with desire. And I knew that If I didn't have him in this very moment, I would never be the same. 14
"Jacob, please," I pleaded, " I need you inside me." And so, without warning, I was full to the maximum with his hot throbbing cock. There was an intense feeling of being complete, fulfilled entirely, and soon that feeling gave way to a very physical need. 15
"Oh, God yes...Jacob!" I moaned, rocking my hips against his. "More!" And he delivered. Oh Jesus did he deliver. Thrusting harder, pinning me to the headboard, I was in total ecstasy. With one final scream,("Oh god, I'm gonna come!" ) we were both spent. He collapsed over me, then rolled to the side, my head in the crook of his neck. Seth stroked my hair, pulling stray wisps out of my face. I let out a satisfied sigh,snuggling down and laying my head on his chest.16
Sleepily, I mumbled, "Your alarm is set, right?"17
"Yeah, for 7:15."18
And I settled in his arms, happier than I'd ever been.19
Author notes
Alright, its over......happy? hope you liked it. JEEBUS cripes does this suck....but i don't delete things, so yea.
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My Gosh, but this was HOT; wasn't even in the storyline but I sure felt like i was! I could go for this kind of "studying" anytime..whew! Excellent excellent excellent erotic write
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"OMG, I LOVED, KEEP IT UP"
HAHA..JUST KIDDING. I DID LIKE IT THOUGH, THOUGHT IT WAS INTERESTING, AND I ACTUALLY THOUGHT THERE WAS MORE TO IT, SO HIM WRITING A PIECE AND U RESPONDING TO IT SOUNDS ABOUT RIGHT...I GOT SOMETHING LIKE THAT ON MY PAGE...CHAPTER 1 - 5, JUST SOMETHING ME AND AN OLD FLAME WROTE BACK AND FORTH, CHECK IT OUT IF UR INTERESTED. GREAT JOB ON THE STORY TELLING. -
know what? this is in essence a true story. My boyfriend (michael) and I (Chelsea) met online 5 days before we met in person. I slept with him that night. and this is only half the story. I wrote this in reply to Michael's piece of the same name, he only didn't put it up yet. If you read both of them, it would make more sense. Sorry to have disappointed you. I'll stick to poetry from now on. Thanks loads for the honesty though. I apprieciated it way more than the usual 'omg, i loved it, keep it up' thanks again!
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not as good as the others.
uh, babe, what happened to your story? it started off so nicely. slow and sweet and nice. then, all of a sudden, shes met him and is doing him two days later? gah! shes acting a ho. what happened to her insecurity about her weight? what happened to your conflict. sure, its written well enough, for a brief erotic synopse, but you had a plot. this is disappointing, i wish you had made the effort to give them a courtship instead of a one-night-stand. and she loves him? gah, he didnt know she existed (quote) until two days ago! i think you could have made this much better. -
awwwww thats so sweet and it kind of reminds me of me and my boyfriend (Michael) no seriously thats really his name. GREAT WRITE im going to check out your other stuff
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This story is really wonderful hun. I fell in love with it. Awesome writings.. Hope you do more.
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most excellent (and can we say hot!!!!!!!!!) I'm thinking you should do part 4 where it's the next night and they're Really going at it. Too bad this only a fantasy. But I'll try to make your dreams come true!
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wooooooooooohooooooooooo ~standing ovation~ encore encore! bravo! ~throws roses~
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ouch chels...lost for words to express how...capturing the series of these stories were..it doesnt even sound like you wrote it..just goes to show how developed you talents' become...keep it up hon...great work!
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know whats great? i'm that girl. except this sort of is fantasy.....long story, but I'm Chelsea, and my fiance's name is Michael.
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Hot. And just perfect. Totally loved it. Kinda like living vicariously through this girl who got to have this guy that she wanted, and it was all so great. Wonderful story, and I'm glad I got to read it.
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