Warriors; Catnapped by Twolegs, Book one, Chapter 1, the northern Star

It was a peaceful day. Hollypaw was out hunting. She crept towards a mouse. Suddenly, a wonderful smell hit her scent glands. Forgetting about the mouse, she followed the wonderful aroma. 1

After a while, she spotted it. Unknowingly she stepped into the cage. BANG! The cage door slammed shut. Hollypaw wailed. She was so scared, she peed. A Twolegs crashed through the forest. It looked over her. Hollypaw hissed. The Twolegs ignored her and picked up the cage. The Twolegs pushed a sharp thing through her thigh. All went black.

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