Black and Blue

Only expirence under the circumstance,1

love, lust, and kisses to boot.2

Burned touches of smoke and asphat,3

scrapes and bruises all over the skin.4


Sticking touch and warm findertips,5

turning up the heat and the pressure.6

Mistakes turn to riches and fame,7

bloody messes to the mass of hurt.8


I come back to the burning motions of hurt,9

cremation to the mind and soul.10

Body dying and tears flying everywhere,11

I'm a broken machine of his use.12


I want him to love my being,13

so I give and hurt and surcome to his solutions.14

kisses overwehling but radiating warmth,15

I'm overcome with happiness of the heart.16


I dont' know what to think when I'm with him,17

he think his thought for the both of the weakness.18

Body and soul overcome with warmth,19

crammed into a tight space of unreceading confidence.20


No one will find out about my hurt,21

I love him so much and my body loves it too.22

But the colors all mix now,23

a mess I will have to deal with later.24


Black and Blue.

Author notes

This is about someone who is being beaten, but she loves the guy so much, she will work it out somehow.

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  • Cheerful-Panda
    December 3, 2007
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    I understand the content your trying to to potray in your poem, it confuses me a bit though, I feel as if your talking about the girl and the guy engaging in intercourse, until I read your note about it being a girl stuck in an abusive relationship did I understand the poem in its entirety. Also there are a few spelling errors.


  • Surreal Rhapsody
    November 14, 2007
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    cool. I really liked that. It was really interesting. ^.^ Great poem, good luck on the contest!!!!