A first line...or a couple...or three (contest)

If something has been bent it can be bent back into place. I am not bent. I am broken. I cannot be put back into place.

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From my short story Get Bent.

A contest entry

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  • Bitter Irony
    November 24, 2007
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    Interesting idea, but sometimes it takes something more concreate to pull the reader into the story. Still, I would be interested in reading more about this character. I also like your title. :-)

    Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!

    ~Bitter Irony