"What would you do if I kissed you?"
A contest entry
- First Lines! by Bitter Irony.
200 points, ended November 30, 2007, 56 entries
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Comments
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Interesting opening, though I think that for the sake of this contest, another sentence or so would need to be added to really catch the reader's attention. It would be helpful to know the sort of atmosphere you're aiming for.
Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!
~Bitter Irony -
I would be very suprised. especially since we're on the computer. lol that would be funny, if you kissed me and stuff!
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You need more... I don't exactly want to keep reading.
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