I didn’t think that I would ever become a serial killer, but then again, I never thought I’d become an ex murderer and look where I am now. I have been killing for my whole life!
Author notes
1st line of Murder on 36th street
A contest entry
- First Lines! by Bitter Irony.
200 points, ended November 30, 2007, 56 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Tell Me What You Think?
Comments
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Make the first sentence shorter in order to trap the reader's attention faster. I'm not sure how I feel about the last line in this opening; I kind of like the "look where I am now," and then cut straight to the action.
Good job on getting the character's voice into the story immediately.
Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!
~Bitter Irony
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