First Liners- Contest Entry

And there they stood, man and horse, silhouetted against the rising sun.

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This is the first line of my first chapter- Chapter One- Just Artemis

A contest entry

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  • Bitter Irony
    November 14, 2007

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    Nice atmosphere in this opening line. I love the way you hook the reader subtly, with the mystery of this man's identity, rather than with action.

    Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck!

    ~Bitter Irony