!?

I'd love to blame everyone else.
I'd love to break those promises I intended to keep.
I'd love to watch the acid burn your skin.
We hypocrites won't survive.
We never really believed in hope.1

You make it seem so obvious.
It's not that easy
In fact, you're not leaving in the morning.
You can't run away.2

Time might be ticking away
And I might not always be here.
And I might not always be right.3

On the inside.
I am dead confused.
but a final conclusion4

I do believe in hope.5

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My writing doesn't seem to be improving.
This is bad.

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  • Yoko
    December 11, 2007

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    I froze when I saw the title. I was like what. So I had to read this to see what it was all about. Nice choice of words. I was kinda confused myself, but after reading it again, I get the story. Good job. Mew!

  • slashinguk
    November 9, 2007

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    Good title

    I like the title, it makes me feel like raising my eyebrows. Really not sure what to make of the rest though. What effect were you hoping to achieve. To confuse the reader or to shock them with your attitude?


  • forevermyangel14
    November 9, 2007
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    today sucks