Darkness surrounds me,suffocating me.The world today contains violence,just like the movie Texas Chainsaw Massacre.We can't stop murdering each other,cutting off each other's wings,pulling at the graceful feathers that lift us in to the air.Few can make it.1
We have little time,as the fog grows heavy and dense.Blind,we stammer through life,not knowing which path to chose.You see,rappers like 50 cent influence little kids.They influence us.Our generation is crumbling.Rap is awesome,right?Wrong!It's destructive.And we are dying now,from violence.2
Open your eyes,kid.Look at what we are going through.Terrorist take the Innocent....3
'Negative images is the main criteria,4
Infecting the young minds faster than bacteria,5
Kids wanna act like what they see in the cinema.'6
I know you don't want to hear about the truth.You get mad at me for protesting.Get it straight,get it through your skull,we aren't killing ourselves,the rappers are killing us.People who curse in their songs every 5 seconds,and show dirtiness in their music videos are the real killers.7
Notice this:you don't see 50 cent on the news for doing a good deed,you see pro football players and other famous celebs on the news for doing a good deed.No rappers.None,nil,zilch. 8
See,they are the ones with their wings broken and gone.So what they do is create violence.Thanks a lot *rolls eyes* 9
But for,me,I'm braking free.I'm flying.I'm going to build my future now.I'm spreading my wings and I'm breaking free.I'm only twelve and look at my point of view of the world...Open your eyes and read in between the lines before it's too late.Will you fly,or will you stay behind?You better decide,because we are now living in the Devil's Reign....it's all the the Book ((the Bible))10
P.S:I say I'm thirteen,because I will be soon-11
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'You get mad at me for protesting.' was one of the lines in this piece.Now,let's see,what just happened?Oh yea,you got ticked off at me because I'm telling people about how the kids around here act.You get mad at me because my daddy's brother had to kill 10 year olds who had guns in their hands and were trying to kill his division and him.You get mad at me because he committed suicide because he couldn't live with the guilt of that.Let's see,what else?
'Negative images is the main criteria,
Infecting the young minds faster than bacteria,
Kids wanna act like what they see in the cinema.'
That's what the Black Eyed Peas think.
Umm,excuse me!Helllo!If you were to read my piece of writing CAREFULLY-which I'm sure you didn't-you would see that I am pointing out ONE of the things that are influencing some kids today.NOTICE that I didn't say ALL of the kids in this piece...duh.
L8er,K
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Umm excuse me? there are a lot more things going on. You can't just take one thing and blame it for all the troubles and the world or in this generation and call it the so called "truth" I listen to a lot of rap and you don't see me trying to act any different or doing anything against the law actually I'm very involved in school and am making good grades so before you try to blame it on rap think your accusation through
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