Fini

Once upon a time there was the end.1

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This is the most secure I have ever felt about winning a trophy.

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  • fae
    August 27, 2005
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    OMG AH HA HA HA! [falls out laughing]


  • Yemassee gold member
    December 19, 2004
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    I'm leaving a paper trail--well an electronic one--you never know where yu'll find my messages to you.


  • Hoovsie
    October 23, 2004
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    Hooves Applauds!

    This was very succinct and to the point. lol I enjoyed but at first was confused but hay that is the story of my life. It is funny to me when my remoo is longer than the item. That makes me smile so big and it isn't easy for a bull to smile. Luckily I just had my teeth cleaned. lol
    Love,
    hooves

  • Papillon1
    October 2, 2004
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    Thank you Thank you..Now all I need to make a set is to win the bronze, I have a feeling I will get no more pity from Yem..perhaps you could have a contest??
    Paps


  • micha
    October 2, 2004
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    lololololololololoololololololololollollololololololollololololololoolol olooollolllllllllaaaaaaaa
    Hooray, at last a really Gold Trophy Worthy Poem!!!!

  • glitter
    October 2, 2004
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    I pity thee

  • glitter
    October 2, 2004
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    Oh my god! That was stupid

  • Yemassee gold member
    October 2, 2004
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    The Real Slim Shady? So you're an annoying, white trashish, white haired, can't sing rapper? ---ummm, could I have some of your money?

  • Papillon1
    October 2, 2004
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    Oh my name is dirt, lowest of the low, poorest of the poor, please welcome me into you pack..I need a home...

  • Papillon1
    October 2, 2004
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    My name is slim shady.....?


  • Yemassee gold member
    October 2, 2004
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    and your name is?

  • Papillon1
    October 2, 2004
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    I thought the castles on the page really added aviance to the story, and probably clinched it as the winner, thank you very much, I shall miss this contest, it is the best thing that has happened to me in a long time, I even forgot my woes and stopped pitying myself for awhile, it was like a mini vacation to a very special place in my heart that I rarely get to visit. I shall miss the attention and now must join the little people once again...I hope they have not forgotten me.
    Love,
    Shauna

  • Papillon1
    October 2, 2004
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    what's so funny buddy?

  • Papillon1
    October 2, 2004
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    Thank you so much! I have really been working hard on it, I considered calling it soft porn just because of people like you who might get turned on by it, but then I decided that it would be better to just let you deal with your feelings and be surprised. YOU GOT THE BRONZE!! No I didn't have to threaten, but it took me years of begging...so you must be smarter than me
    Love always,
    Shauna

  • kami
    October 2, 2004
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    this was the hottest poem ever it turned me on!!! jk kidding or am i *rolls eyes innocent smile* rock on *high five* lol you so deswerved first lol and you didn't have to threaten ne one ever geez i like had to threaten yem to get that bronze lol oh well great job it is truly a work of art
    love always
    kami

  • -BlackKnight-
    October 2, 2004
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    AHAAHHAHAHHHAHHAHHAHAHHAHA.

  • Yemassee gold member
    October 2, 2004
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    Well it was the surprise ending that makes this such an amazing tale. I never saw it coming. Also the beginning was so different from most beginnings, I bet this will be the contest winner!
    Edited on Oct 02 because ''.

  • Jay Is Magic
    October 1, 2004
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    BRAVO! THIS IS THE BEST THAT I HAVE EVER READ! I APPLAUD THEE!

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