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Welcome to the Inter-Galactic Colonisation Academy – Terraforming 101. 1

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You’ve all completed the units in Introductory Colonisation, Light Speed Propulsion, and Generation Ships. If you haven’t already completed the Planetary Sciences unit, you’ll need to take a supplementary course in Biospherics to gain credit for this unit. Enough of the formalities; let’s begin. 3

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The objective of terraforming is to achieve maximum habitability with minimum investment of energy . Do any of you know how much it costs to send a generation ship from just one spiral arm to another?   Believe me, it takes more than you could earn from a lifetime ownership of several asteroid belts!   Minimum energy is the key; it makes the whole process viable. 5

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So, how do we do it? Simple! Pick the right planet. A planet with life. Specifically: carbon-based life with a DNA encoded genome. 7

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With modern telescopes, finding a suitable planet is straightforward within a galaxy, although we require advanced techniques to detect good destinations in neighbouring galaxies. Once we find the right target, we prepare and launch a generation ship to the planet. Then, while it’s in transit, we start the terraforming process. 9

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And how exactly do we terraform it? We send information , my friends. Information. And what is the most basic form of information? Electromagnetic radiation! 11

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So, we send all this information to these DNA based life forms, and what do they do with it? I hear you ask. Wrong question. What does it do with them?! It targets their DNA, causing mutations of our design. 13

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We pick simple life forms since sentient creatures might interfere with the process, but given the right pre-conditions, this technique has never failed. Not once, out of the billion worlds colonised to date. 15

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Take this planet for example: the third planet from a G-type, yellow star, it has an active biosphere and good prospects to be habitable for at least another seven or eight galactic rotations. In this reconstruction, you see that the planet has no advanced sentient life forms or technologies. Since the atmosphere and conditions are well-enough suited to our colonists, we need only ensure that the biosphere is suitably accommodating on their arrival. Therefore, we start sending packets of information. 17

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We encode the packets into gamma rays which, as you can see in this replay, impact the atmosphere and cause irradiation of the life forms below. The precisely selected energy frequencies cause exactly two mutations to the target species: the development of ‘language’ and of ‘technology’. You will note that we do not impart the full suite of natural mental development as this would impair the future terraforming efforts. Instead, we ensure that every technological innovation the target species develops can be shared with every other member of their species. 19

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Take a look at the planet’s fauna. Who wants to suggest a suitable candidate species? 21

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No. Even though they make up most of the biomass, arthropods lack the intellectual faculties we need. 23

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Interesting choice – these tentacled molluscs have intellectual potential and manipulative dexterity, but they would not survive the environmental modifications we want to induce. 25

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You with the exoskeleton…Almost. That’s a very large mammal species with warm blood and a dextrous proboscis. However, they have a narrow dietary range, we require omnivores. 27

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No one suggested this jungle-dwelling primate species. There is only a small population, but they have all the required characteristics – adaptability, cranial capacity, manual dexterity. Endowed with vocal range and mental enhancement the process begins. With subsequent adjustment using further rays, you can see that they rapidly rose to dominate their planet. The development processes are unnaturally fast without the development of wisdom that normally accompanies intelligence. Things take a little while at first, but watch now as the extinction rate picks up. First, the larger, slower-breeding species die off, then the eco-system goes out of balance. 29

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By now, the generation ship has already arrived there, but from here we can only see it as it was about one hundred stellar orbits before the vessel arrived. The people of this world have developed industry and advanced technology, without the restraint normally accompanying these capabilities. 31

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The program is working perfectly and you can rest assured that by the time the generation ship arrived they found the planet in perfect condition for colonisation…sterile. 33

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  • trekkergirl gold member
    August 18
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    Thank you for joining my contest. I can now close this contest.

  • trekkergirl gold member
    August 18

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    This is very interesting indeed. I have this contest called where no man has gone before... it was originally for star trek stories... however, I recently opened it to any kind of sci fi stories or poems. I would suggest you enter this story and see how well you do in it. So far there aren't a lot of contestants however, you would make enough for me to judge the contest.

    I did enjoy this read. Good job!

    . Rewarded 8


  • pink polka
    August 8

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    That was really cool. I liked how it's kinda an instruction list. It's possible to imagine you are neeeding it.

    . Rewarded 4

  • Heheh I liked it. I was wondering whether this was a class given to earthlings, or if this planet that they're terraforming is earth. Either way its a good read, I liked the manual format as well, things being explained are usually interesting for some reason.

    Thanks for entering!

    . Rewarded 6

  • This is sort of like an instruction manual, I was looking for more of a story. Thank you for entering.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Quixotic Greeters member
    May 20

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    THis was entertaining to read. Sort of read like a manual of sorts. Never read anything quite like it before. Well done. Enjoyed it~D


  • valentine7
    March 9

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    Good idea, very original and well executed. I haven't seen anything I can compare it to so good job.

  • ^_^
    That was pretty cool. I've never read anything like it before.
    Good Job!


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    December 5, 2007

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    Congrats on the silver. Not a bad short story. It reminds me a little of Anne McCaffrey's style.
    I don't have anything to add for improvements.
    Brooke

    . Rewarded 4


  • Bitter Irony
    November 8, 2007

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    GRB...Gamma Ray Bursts?

    I love your choice of viewpoint and tone in this story--very original, and very engaging. Your ending was very powerful--not quite a twist, not quite a punch-line, but somewhere between the two.

    Your pacing is good, right up until "Take this planet for example;" from that point, the three long and technical paragraphs drag. See if you can add more interesting descriptions. I know your goal is to sound like an introductory college course, but make sure it's an engaging college course!

    Good luck in the contest!

    ~Bitter Irony

    . Rewarded 8

    • slashinguk
      November 8, 2007
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      Correct

      About a dozen people have read this story of mine and you're the first to get the title reference, clearly you know your astronomy. Thanks for the feedback, I'll reconsider that paragraph as I never liked it myself, but you've really crystallised the problem for me.

      [Edit] Ok - I've reworded and now the word count jumps all over the place. When I first re-edited it, it was 748 words, but formatting was all screwed up. So, I added some paragraph marks and the word count came in at 760! It's 720 words according to MS-Word. If you really want me to, I'll take out the paragraph marks to stay under the competition word count target.

      [Edit 2] Did some fine tuning and got it down to the SW 750 words, after re-checking the contest rules to be sure.

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