The cell

"Well well well did that feel good my dear?" came the voice over the box1

shocked i spun desperatly tring to find who was speaking.2

"Woo my dear. dont be so frightend."3

what was i suppose to feel like?happy and just start talking to him? i dont think so! ill just stick with being frightend.4

"who are you?" trying not to so my weak side5

"the names Chad Griffon" politely saying but i found nothing polite about it6

"Why am i here? Where am i? How did i get here?"7

well i was just about to answer those questions before they even came to word" chad started slightly anoyed " to answer your question. you are located thirty-feet belowground so its useless to shout for help but just incase i made the walls out of reinforced sound proof glass" sounded as if he had a smile on his face "your here cause i wanted someone i can have a little fun with"8

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  • GreyMist
    January 28, 2005
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    no soory no sex is going to be placed into this because im underage to write explicit and if i do and put it into another catagory ild get in trouble sry chrissy!!

  • LonelyDepressed
    January 27, 2005
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    is he going to rape him?! is someone else going to rape him?! anything i can watch?!?! ...lol kidding
    thats really good
    ((but i still think there should be sex involved.. but thats probably just me.....)

    Christmas

  • shefalls
    October 9, 2004
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    quite eeire =)


  • October 6, 2004
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    veeery twilite zone i love twight zone and therefore i loved this poemm great job

  • DistantMemory
    October 1, 2004
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    Uh-oh! haha thriller! Good job! I love you!!!

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