Jason broke out a binder and pen.He started keeping track of when Nadia was on line.1
Jason adjusted his computer and set it up so that every time she logged on the computer it alerted him. And he would get up write down when she was on and log in under a new name each time, that way he could find out about her. He kept records and patterns on her on line time. That way he basically knew or had an idea of her schedule. Between the long gaps he figured out her work schedule and other things. 2
Nadia was a different kind of girl, when people on line chatted with her, she would talk to them for a bit and dog them out, she was inclined to cyber sex and talking dirty to some stranger cause she knew she would never meet him. Plus she had friend all over the place that she chatted with.3
Jason among the many things he did while hacking her computer and being able to read all her messages and email, and her archive vault. He sent her pop ups. He was able to bring up what she was checking out on her computer, and since she had a web cam to chat with family, he took that over to so he could watch her.4
Jason was not crazy. You could say he operated on a genius level.5
Although what he was doing was illegal, he didn't care. Since he lost his family, he though of her as family.6
Jason met Nadia on line in one of those cyber chat room, single in new york, or along those line. they were chatting about kung fu and beans. when he viewed her profile7
it read: Nadia8
divorced9
student10
favorite gadgets are mine11
live for today tomorrow might not come12
hmmm, he thought this is a complex girl. Then he clicked her pictures, 3 pictures of her popped up. he had one of those smiles that went ear to ear. Big brown van Morrison eyes, and longing curly dark hair. But for him there was something about her eyes and smile that attracted him to her. Jason thought she was lovely. So he asked her asl.13
What did you think? Please comment!
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How far into this can you get?
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why whats up have you read all of them? I need to actually go thru them and edit them. WOuld you like another piece of it?
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It is imperative...I get more...
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this is just super. I am really enjoying the change of pace from all the different writes in your collection. this one fits in real well
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Eek!
I'm afraid.....very afraid!! Bringing a lot of jumbled fears together back from the dead!!! Evil I say! Evil!!
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There are those out there who love to watch...Internet voyeur...
Love to feel what you feel
Try to associate and blend in
Become a part of your life
In his mind,he will win
Great story....I have been wanting to write them...I still need to work at it...lol
I'm still working at it....
Keep on writing and exciting
and much love~Desire
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ohhh nadia i love you, will you marry me and be my girl. sorry, i thought i was jason for a moment then, just let me rip off this melted cheese face mask. good little story. i am sure things like that happen too.
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Cyber stalkers are way more prevalent than you would think. They not only want control of your machine... they want control of you! This does seem like an 'intro' to another story.
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Very unique and original. A cyber stalker is a very interesting concept. This is a good write and I think you could very easily take this to another level. Great work. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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this is kind of weird. it's good but I have to agree with plinkyponk that this does seem like the beginning of something. But it's very good. I hope you develop the story a bit more fully later on.
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lol plinky didnt know what asl meant. heh. This is okay...it doesnt really have a high point. Your a jason to me. I liked the 3rd person tone.
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very good
Frightening and yet exciting at the same time. Very well written.
John -
A online stalker! This story made me laugh for some reasons, one was the line 'he had one of those smiles that went ear to ear', I just used those words today
And the haching thing, not long ago I got the visit of one, he actually 'talked' to me
It was kind funny, scary but funny.
Well, your story was well told and I think taht there are many Jason's and Nadia's out there
Mari
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I think you should include some capital letters in this, as without them it has a rather naive feel and look. The subject matter is interesting and I'm sure that similar occurances do actually take place.
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whats asl mean? this reads like the beginning of something
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haha yay!!!
*eager laps it up, waiting for more*
this rocked!!!
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