The Beauty of Pain

Heart probably shouldn't have been surprised. Of course, Heart was surprised. Jamie and Ellie probably shouldn't have been surprised when Heart stormed out of the room crying. Of course, neither of them were.1

No one was surprised when Heart came back into the dance room during the last song.2

Hell, Ethan and Ellie looked cute together. Who knew he could dance? Monday was going to be hard. Wednesday was going to be awkward. Friday was going to be painful.3


Ah, the beauty of pain.4

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Does this make sense? Oh well. It doesn't have to.

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  • writinglover
    November 12, 2007
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    AWESOME!!

    Woa...You know what?? this is amazing! I love your work so much! Keep it up! :-)


  • riasme
    November 6, 2007

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    ohhh man...tomorrow's wednesday...ooohhh...


  • tsarina
    November 5, 2007
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    um, yeah, sorry, no more cheerios. *sheep*


  • tsarina
    November 5, 2007
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    i hate wednesdays. i agree with lise. cheerios! at least we all hate ethan now.


    • DeadlyTurnip
      November 5, 2007
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      I can't say I hate him...but you can feel free to!

      ...

      FISHNETS!!!

  • riasme
    November 5, 2007
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    awwwww...wednesday IS going to be painful...we'll just give him dirty looks and say "fishnets." XP poor heart. have some cheerios.


    • DeadlyTurnip
      November 5, 2007
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      Thank you for the cheerios! *glares at sasha's sheep* just kidding.


  • i-love-yu..x
    November 4, 2007

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    Uhhhhhhmmmm...

    I don't get his. It really doesn't make sense.. good storyline, but just wrong combination of words.. if you know what I mean.. sorry for critisism.. good job! and good luck!


    • ShezUnique
      November 7, 2007
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      I totally agree...I'm not getting a clear view or understanding from this..

  • BonaFidePoet
    November 4, 2007
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    ah, the beauty of pain and irony.


  • TwilightWolf
    November 4, 2007
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    I feel your pain


  • potaytee
    November 4, 2007
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    That is good!!!!!!! What option is it?

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