(not finished had to get off computer)

I sat on the bench and strapped on my gloves. Taking a deep breath I stood up, feeling the support of the thick boots. I was ready. Physicaly any way. If I was mentaly intune with what I was about to do I probly wouldn't be standing there. It was pure antisipation that held a grin on my face and my hands steady.1

As I walked through the tight corridors I could smell the harsh scent of tires and top fuel. My nose recoiled until I got used to the bitter waft. Swallowing the knot that just developed in my throut.2

It started growing louder as I proceded towards the bays. The previously low hum now grew slowly to a deafening roar. A pair of drag cars were now leaving the track.

Author notes

I don't have a favorite author but a very good book is The Glasswright's Apprentice by Mindi L. Klasky.

A contest entry

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  • HeartSxAnDxStripeS
    November 17, 2007

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    I know its not finished, but I really liked the start, and I'm gonna have to judge the contest, but I really want you to send me a message once its finished, I wanna read more.


  • HeartSxAnDxStripeS
    November 7, 2007
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    prompts are up