I'm coming undone, it screamed inside his head and he sat in the little room, keep holding on, he told himself though he knew it wouldnt last much longer. 1
Guess the black dots have come again to get me. Horrid images played in front of his eyes and he laughed sadisticly at them. Too late, I'm coming undone. 2
He choked on his laughter as the images rapidly changed for the worse, and these he didnt find funny. These were his personal horrors. His worst memories. And they were all he had. These demons were his only friends in this cold room. 3
Since he was young he's tasted sorrow on his tongue, hes been tourchered by this insanity and now hes loked up for it. Sorrow, pain, hate, its all he knew. 4
He grins as another thought comes to him. The last thing he did before they put him here. Thats right, he thought, trigger between my eyes. But he was caught and locked up in this hell-hole with only his sadistic thought as company5
I'm trying to hold it together6
Head is lighter than a feather7
Looks like i'm not getting better8
Not getting better
Author notes
I do not own KoRn or Coming Undone I only own Story of a Song.
If you know get the story, the guy is in an asylum
this link has the song and if you hit more on the about the video it has the lyrics. Ignore the video if you wish I only used it because it had both song and lyrics all in one
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xVWagrjoPKQ
A contest entry
- Sing A Song Of Sixpence by UndercoverShinoda.
450 points, ended March 23, 2008, 11 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
GOT comments??
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This was good, but the one thing I had to point out is this:
"black dots", I believe, should be "black thoughts". That's the correct lyric.
I like how you combined the lyrics into the story. Good luck in my contest. -
I could definitely get a sense of being loosened from "reality" in this story.
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That was what I Was working for, I'm glad you liked it
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I like this because, first off, it's about KoRn, and secondly, I've never seen anyone make up a story about a song. Also, I can easily convince myself that the person you're talking about in the story is Jon Davis, the singer of KoRn. I like this a lot.
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thanks, I just made up a random crazy suicidal guy sorry if I just spoiled anything for you, thanks for reading it though! KoRn kicks ass!!
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