Your Star By Evanescence (part of my new series Story of a Song)

I sat in the corner of the little apartment with tears running down my face. Where's your star? Your love? I had you with me and I'm all alone now. 1

You were my other half and you ran away when we got to this city. I HATE Lisbon! The day we got to this place you told me you didn't like it and I would have left then! Why did you go first?!2

You used to love me and everything I stood for, but not anymore. Do you even care? 3

I can't see your star4

I can't see your star5

Though I patiently waited bedside for the death of today6

I can't see your star7

At least its dark now. No one coming to the apartment, no one wanting to talk to me. But how could the darkness feel so wrong? Its so quiet, to quiet. I can't break this silence, its breaking me. Its terrifying me. Another tear falls down my face. I would have understood if you just wanted to leave but with HER?! All my fears turn to rage and still I'm all alone. I loved you and now I have nothing worth fighting for. 8

I can't see your star.9

I can't see your star.

Author notes

I don't own Evanescence or the song "Your Star". I do, however, own Story of a Song. I made the pic at the top on PictureIT!99

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  • Miss Fang
    November 23, 2007

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    I really like how you interpreted this song. It is a great song and I think you took a step in the dark by trying to develop a story about it because of how its meaning can be manipulated depending on personal experiences, but you succeeded and I am sure anyone who has heard the song will agree with me that you have pretty much gotten it right.


    • Violet Hawthorne
      January 1, 2008
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      thanks, it took me awhile to find a meaning in it. I made it take place in lisbon, not because of the lyrics but because it was written in Lisbon. I heard Amy Lee got very depressed while on tour there and just started writing this


  • Prodigious.Mirth gold member
    November 8, 2007
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    hahah this was cool and fresh good work.. keep it up blair