I need, You need, We all need………….1
Come to bed lover of mine,2
I wait in my see-through negligee.3
I pose sex, now! For you.4
Lay me down gently.5
Open me up and find your treasure.6
Guide my hands to your hardness while,7
You tantalise my every sense. 8
Let us roam the sexual seas as one9
and release our orgasms together.10
Let me have…11
Let us find…12
Sexual healing!13
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Wow, very well done. It shows your want and yet still is not so sexually charged with very graphic imagery.
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honost opinion.
im not sure if it was suppose to be funny or what. but i just didn't like it. i guess that is just me though looking at your other comments. lol. -
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no it wasnt sposed to be funny, is an adult erotic poem.
But thank you for reading of course
Cindy
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Wow,
wifey , that is one incredible, simple, deep, sexy, arousing, wonderful piece of writing! Once again, I am stunned by your penmanship (should that be penpersonship?) and I bow (deeply) to your superior skill!
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Thankls Hubby
Glad I have stunned you hehehehe
I will be offline for a week
Miss me lol and talk when I get back
xoxo
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darn right sexy, darn right simplistic and darn right arousing in it even simple forms....
if you dont become and erotic, published author, Im gunna slap you asumthing silly...
keep on inspiring me to write and to become a better person cindy...
I wait in my see-through negligee.3
I pose sex, now! For you.4
Lay me down gently.5
Open me up and find your treasure.6
MY FAVOURITE PART.....
love always Blair xoxox
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Darn spot on comment, thanks babeand yes slap me if I dont become a published erotic writer pleasssssssse
hahahahaha
the start is my fav part too heheheh
Much
thanks babe
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lolz. nicee
haha. you dirty girl XD tis good descriptive. -
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thanks haylee
I am a dirty girl, I love to be a dirty girl
I love to write dirty
Okay enough dirty hahahahahahaha
thanx for reading my new GalPal
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