Unpardonable Sin--6

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Chapter 22

Section 13

New York City 19764

On this brisk March morning Andrea Nelson’s sleek black Porsche fought for road space with the battered yellow cabs. The cabs were like an army of beetles out to devour a single fly and her Porsche was that quick and clever fly. Normally, she enjoyed this daily confrontation as she headed out of Gramercy Park into the business district. This morning, however, the race to each streetlight was just another aggravation to increase the irritation that plagued her. 5

‘Thomas Devlin.’ She hadn't been able to put him out of her thoughts since Michael O'Neill's party. Each detail of the young man was on a captured film playing over and over in her mind. Three nights she woke in a rush of desire from dreaming of the lust they shared; hot, violent, his paleness molded into her darkness like cream spilling into coffee. Only it hadn't happened as yet. 6

Andrea kept making excuses to soothe her pride. Maybe he didn't get her messages? Didn’t have a private office…. She hit her palm against the steering wheel. Why didn't she just forget the creep? She couldn't. The challenge of tearing down that unapproachable barrier the young lawyer presented, beset her ever since he turned down her proposition. She remembered how the warmth of his eyes offered what the coolness in his voice declined. 7

There were plenty of men who gladly pursued Andrea, but she knew that wasn't what she needed. Andy girl had to do the pursuing and the dominating for the victory to be enjoyed. 8

With ample time off due her, Andrea had decided to make plans for a long weekend. A phone conversation the previous evening with her closest friend, Shelia Connors Beechen, had basically confirmed them. "Your love nest won't be invaded,” Shelia promised. “Andy, are you finally going to replace that brother of mine with a solid relationship? Does little me know him?" 9

Andrea had noted the time on her wristwatch. It worried her as she realized it was before seven in the evening and already Shelia’s words were slurred. Shelia was drinking too much. Andrea had been tempted to chastise her; but only said, "Not hardly, Shell, he's young, fresh faced, and eager to please. I'll make certain you don't meet him." She’d joined in Shelia’s schoolgirl giggles fully aware the other woman wouldn’t be laughing if she guessed whom Andrea’s sights were set on. 10

The scene at O’Neill’s when Shelia had so blatantly come between them hadn’t been lost on Andrea. Thomas Devlin had given her the right signals when first introduced, and it was only after Shelia’s arrival at the party that he seemed to withdraw. Shelia had been indulging Andrea with tales about her extramarital affair with this darling little collage boy, for several years. So, while Shelia had never put a name to her boy toy, Andrea now figured she knew who he was.11

Attempting to change the focus of her thoughts, Andrea contemplated the unpleasant task facing her as she pulled into her reserved parking space. As a Children’s Advocate for the county, she faced the paper work required to close her end of a neglect case. 12

Installed in her office by eight thirty, before nine she was on her second cup of coffee and the file lay open on her desk. The black and white morgue photos didn’t do ample justice to the condition of the girl’s body. Andrea had viewed the actual eleven-year-old victim. 13

She trembled as her finger traced the contours of Hailey’s paper face. If it hadn’t been for the patchy Afro and slight thickening of the lips, the child’s race would have been questionable. The battered features in the photo were no longer recognizable. The Hailey, whose timid face flashed in Andrea’s mind, had large hazel eyes set above a tiny button of a nose.14

Andrea’s file went back two years. Hailey was nine the first time she ran away from her mother’s roach infested apartment. The little girl could still cry then and… laugh. Yes, laugh. Andrea remembered the sound erupting from the small mouth as Hailey’s foster parents’ fat old poodle licked Hailey’s cheeks and the child hugged its neck and laughed out loud. The memory of the sound came back to Andrea and she felt a burning anger. ‘God Damn! the family court judge who continued to return custody to that stinking alcoholic mother. He should have been made to view Hailey’s body.’15

The case belonged to Homicide now. Hailey’s mommy’s latest boyfriend, battered, raped and killed her daughter, while she lay passed out in the next room. 16

‘Damn that son of a bitch!’ Andrea hit the desk. ‘Screw the whole lousy system! ‘ If only her department had more power over court decisions, she might have saved Hailey.17

‘ Put her out of your mind, girl. You can’t dwell on this! You followed the drill. You removed the child immediately from the dangerous environment. You did the paperwork and the things allowed by law. You didn’t become too personally attached in these cases or you ended up on the funny farm.’ She made a final notation and closed the file. 18

Andrea primarily worked with New York’s new plague of drug-addicted teenagers. These were underage boys and girls coerced into thievery or prostitution to maintain their habit. Her contacts with them took place in court, jails, hospitals, and on the streets. This office time required to write up reports and to update files did a job on her restless nature. Grimacing as she finished off the bitter coffee, Andrea slammed another folder shut and glared at the remaining pile. It seemed to be growing not shrinking. 19

She placed a call. This was the third attempt this morning and she received the same answer. “Mr. Devlin is not available.”20

As the morning dragged on she was becoming more and more agitated. Her plans for the weekend weren't working out. At a little before eleven she spotted Hal Dexter ambling down the hallway and an idea came to her. 21

Pulling open the half glass door of her office, Andrea called out, "Hal! Give me a moment."22

Hal Dexter was Andrea’s friend. They’d met when Hal was a boy and she was seventeen, at the time the six years separating their ages made Andrea feel like an older sister towards him. Maturity had sculptured the skinny male body with haphazard parts into a presentable masculine image but Andrea remained unaffected by the changes. 23

Since they both took special care not to advertise their relationship at work, his dark face registered curiosity as she ushered him into the office and shut the door. 24

"Sit." Andrea ordered. "I need a favor."25

"Sure." Hal lowered himself into the desk chair she indicated with an impatient wave of her hand.26

"I want you to make a call for me. I want you to say you're my father. Remember how you use to do that for me when we were kids?" 27

"What?" 28

Andrea perched on the edge of her desk and lifted the receiver. Toying with it she said, "Pretend it's summer vacation. I'm a clerk in my Daddy's office and you're my little lackey again." 29

Hal Dexter eyed her suspiciously. "Why Andrea? You don't need to play that crap anymore—summer school's long gone. You're not into some kind of trouble are you?" 30

She let her voice fall into the whiny tone she used as a girl to get her way. "Play nice, pretty boy, get me out of this jam and I'll get you tickets to the next Yankee Game." 31

“Jam?”32

Andrea tossed her long hair so it slapped at her cheeks. There was an angry lift in her tone. "I've been trying to reach someone for three days. The assholes at his office keep giving me excuses. He is either out or in conference-- you know, the usual bull. I'd call and say I was dad's secretary, but by now that bitch on the switchboard would recognize my voice."33

"Can't you call this guy at home?" 34

"Spare me!” Andrea used one finger to tap her forehead. “Don't you think that marvelous idea came to me? Trouble is there are a zillion Devlins in the directory and I have no idea where he lives. Hell, his phone could be unlisted." She grabbed his hand and pressed the receiver firmly in his palm. "I'll dial. You just say what I tell you. When he comes on the line, you make a fast exit."35

"I don't like this. What's so important you have to reach this guy?"36

“Please. You owe me." Andrea pouted. "You got this nice cushy county job instead of pounding a city beat and I ask one little favor and you hassle me."37

"What do I say?"38

"Just tell them you're Judge Alvin Nelson and you want to speak to Mr. Thomas Devlin. If he's not in find out when you can call back and reach him--you know the drill." Her fingers punched in the now memorized number.39

Dexter only repeated the first instructions into the phone then chuckled and handed Andrea the receiver. "She's getting him." She could see he had difficulty suppressing his laughter as he lunged to his feet and headed for the door.40

“Always the wiseass.” She threw at his back. Then a voice came over the phone line.41

"Thomas Devlin here.”42

“Tom, it’s Andrea Nelson."43

"Yes, ‘sir’, your honor." Devlin drew the words out as if to inform her someone was hovering near him and listening.44

"I had an idea," Andrea said. "The Jersey shore is beautiful this time of year and my friends have a place in Ocean City. It's a nice drive down . . ."45

"Of course." Devlin interrupted. "But it would be more convenient if I were to meet you there."46

"Meet me? You don't know where the place is."47

"You were going to tell me?" There was a hint of amusement in Devlin's tone but he was obviously still hindered by another's presence. "Say this evening." He sounded as if he were making a business appointment.48

"The Hide Away." Andrea grabbed for a place, and the restaurant’s name seemed to fit the mood, though there wasn't a reason in the world to be discreet. "It's in Summers Point. We can have dinner and you can follow me onto the island."49

"Fine. About seven thirty." The phone connection closed.50

"I don't believe the bastard!" Andrea sputtered aloud as she glared at the phone. ‘Hung up on me! Just like that! Who the hell did Mr. Thomas Devlin think he was! Some piss ass attorney.’51

She was tempted to forget the whole thing. She dropped heavily into her desk chair. For a while she scanned several files but her mind wasn't on work. She began making excuses for Devlin’s abruptness. It wasn't his fault—not really. He was probably at the switchboard. Some big shot or other could have been listening? She put him in a difficult position calling him at the office. 52

Andrea did another once-over of her cases. She chucked the files into a drawer and locked it. It was almost noon. If she skipped lunch, made the hospital run, she could be on the road by three. That would give her time to stop in Ocean City, shower and dress before she met Tom. 53

She was trembling as in her mind she sought the depth of those strange light gray eyes. She fantasized that she was touching the black wave that settled on his forehead. Tom was smaller than the men Andrea usually found attractive. Still, she guessed his height at close to six feet and the cut of the tuxedo hadn't detracted from the lithe shape of the body beneath. Damn! If she continued to fantasize… she giggled, suddenly feeling like a teenager. Tom Devlin didn't know the trouble he'd bought himself. Andrea Nelson wanted him and she was going to have him.54

Grabbing her coat from the hall rack, Andrea paused at main office where several secretaries worked. "Sandy." She gave the girl a pleasant smile. "I'm not going to be back in today. I have a few appointments that can't wait. And I want to check up on a couple of hospital cases. I put in for four vacation days, so I'm off to the shore."55

"No problem." The young lady smiled back. "I'll fix your schedule. Have a good time at the shore. Anything comes up that can't wait, I'll get someone to handle it." 56

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  • Well this chapter certainly is a lot easier that the last to read. Only one new character to deal with! It seems positively sedate after the bombardment of the last chapter. lol. Back to being serious though, another good read. I liked that the story focused more in this section. It allowed for a better understanding of Andrea, although Im not sure if I like her (as a person, she make for a very intreaging character), I wouldnt trust her as far as I could throw her just yet.
    I loved how this episode started, with the imagry of the beatles! I thought it was a very good way to set the scene. I also thought it was amusing how Andrea thinks of it as 'the lust THEY shared' as if Devlin couldnt possibly not feel those things for her as well. As far as I could tell he never gave across those feelings for her at the party but for her it seems a foregone conclusion that any man she wants will fall in love with her (or at least in bed).
    Excelent writing as usual,

    X Amber X

    • Amber, morning

      After the first long chapter, the Saint Paddy's Day Party, things move along with less confusion. I tried a dozen was to introduce the Clans without that party, and nothing seemed to work as well.

      When it comes to guys, Andy Baby usually gets the ones she wants; only she can't hold on to them.

      I'm so glad you are continuing to read. If you have any suggestions or find some goofs please let me know.

      geri


  • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
    December 1, 2007

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    Very good installment.

    I like the way you entertwine subplots into the story. This chapter was very entertaining and easy to follow. Does the next part get into their date or run off in some other direction? Is this your first novel? You write very well. Well this time I don't feel like I'm getting lost, but I am not certain I have all the characters in my mind. I don't think I have run into a story with so many characters.

    Andy

    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      December 2, 2007

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      Hi Andy, nice snowy day here so I expect to get a lot of writing done.

      Yes, this was the first novel I actually completely, that was like ten years ago. It was almost 1000 pages and has since been rewritten a number of times. It’s still a hefty 400 pages—grin. I have managed to write four other novels, while I kept going back and working on US.

      Andrea and Thomas will get together—sigh. I did want to keep him for myself.

      Thanks so much for continuing to read and comment.

      Geri


      • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
        December 2, 2007
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        I'll try to follow through.

        Have you published any of your novels? I usually choose skinny books, around 250 - 300 pages with the exception of Taylor Caldwell who is my favorite author. I read a lot of John Creasy. I'm currently reading a Dick Francis novel, Vampires in the Family by Delfishie, Bookmark by lostskins, and your novel. I am going to be busy for a while. I am also hosting a contest for kids fourteen and under and the New Members Contest for December. I am spreading the wealth rather thinly. Anyway, they are all important to me. I will probably get through them all. The contests will take priority.

        Do you have a part seven? It is not in the list.

        Andy


  • Abstract Muse gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    Ah, so the party is over and the real game has begun. And it starts with Andrea, hmmm.

    I found it amusing to start off with a dream about Devlin, then about her work, then onward after Devlin. hehe

    She seems to have a demanding job. That should lead to more intrigue as the story develops.

    As through the party there is a good description of the situation given through the mix of dialog and narrative. It sounds like Tom will have an interesting evening, if he shows. Somehow I think he will.

    As Phil mentioned, it is nice to see a female character take a lead role in a story. Especially a politically oriented one. Yet then again, you are a female writer so go figure. -chuckles-

    This is an interesting switch in direction after the party. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here.

    I need to go read seven. I'm still behind here. lol

    Great job.
    Greg

    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      November 18, 2007
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      You guys keep reading me and I’m going to have to get off my duff and keep posting.

      I love this. I have so wanted some masculine opinions on this story; but until I found this group, I only seem to court female readers. Not that I didn’t appreciate their contributions, I did, but it helps to have both views.

      When I finally get up nerve to start circulating some queries, I know what’s facing me out there.

      So thanks so much for reading, commenting and suggesting.

      Geri

  • Lou Berg
    November 8, 2007

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    Very good read

    This was a unique chapter, all about one person's activities.

    Easy to follow and very well put together as one paragraph flowed smoothly into another.

    I really enjoyed reading it.

    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      November 9, 2007
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      Hi Lou, yep the party is over. No more load of characters pounding at the door to enter the story.

      I'm so happy you are finding time to read me and comment.

      Geri


  • Token Massacre silver member
    November 8, 2007

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    On this brisk March morning
    comma after morning

    I like the description that you used of the fly/beetle

    You didn’t become too personally attached in these cases or you ended up on the funny farm.’
    since this is thought you should actually say "don't" for didn't and "would end" instead of ended

    "Sit." Andrea ordered
    since this is a mode of speech it should have a comma not a fullstop

    This has great character development. your description is very well done and I'm really enjoying this story. Keep it up and let me know when the next part is available.

    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      November 9, 2007
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      Morning, thanks so much for catching my booboos.

      I'm so glad you are continuing to read and enjoy the story.

      Geri


  • eyeambaldman
    November 6, 2007

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    Ah yes, another cool chapter. At first I was a little lost, but I think it's just me trying to remember all the characters and how they fit together so far. Then, this chapter sped up rapidly. As usual, the dialogue is fantastic.

    I do think you could give Hal a bit more personality in his scene with Andrea. He seemed a bit bland at first.

    Andrea seems quite a decent and sympathetic character here--despite her lust for Devlin. I got the feeling she was quite a bitch in the 1st chapter. I kind of like her now. It's good to see strong female characters. There aren't enough of those in books or movies these days.

    Keep posting, can't wait to see where this goes!

    • gerifitzsimmons Greeters member
      November 6, 2007
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      My number one fan—smile. Thanks so much for the review and the comments.

      I did want Andrea to appear a ‘B’ in the opening. She often is when dealing with the Connors and O’Neill clans.

      The main theme of the story: The Old Fellow said, “Sure, but I sprinkled a bit of goodness on the sinners, and splashed a bit of evil on the saints so the line between is really very faint.”

      This is Andrea’s chapter to shine a bit. Sometimes she’s very good; but when she’s bad she’s horrid.

      Hal Dexter is kind of bland here. I could spruce him up a little, I suppose.

      Again thanks for reading,

      Geri

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