9:00AM1
SATURDAY MORNING2
THE GALUPPI'S RESIDENT3
Nathan and Emily Galuppi had been married for three years. Emily had no idea that their marriage was in trouble until she recieved a damning phone call from a mysterious female. Emily felt as though all of her dreams had became a complete fantacy.4
EMILY :5
Nathan, how could you do this to me? How could you do this to our marriage? I can't believe this shit! I thought you truly loved me!6
NATHAN :7
Emily baby I'm so sorry. I didn't mean for you to find out this way. I swear I didn't.8
EMILY :9
Oh My God Nathan is that all you have to say? I mean do you even realize what you have done?10
NATHAN :11
I made a big mistake baby. I can't go back and change anything because if I could I would. Please accept my apology. I know without a doubt that I was wrong and baby I'm truly sorry.12
EMILY :13
Yeh, I bet you are sorry! I just can't believe you allowed something like this to happen! Then you exspect for me to treat it as if it's no big deal? Just get out of my face! I can't stand to look at you! I HATE YOU!14
NATHAN :15
Baby I know you're hurt by all of this. I can't blame you but I do love you Emily and I don't want my mistake to pull us apart. I will give you some space but I'm not giving up on our marriage. I love you to much.16
EMILY :17
You don't have a damn clue what love even means so don't give me that lame ass bullshit! I want you to get out right now!!!!18
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Consumed with guilt Nathan gathered some of his things and left. Nathan knew that his mistake could very well cost him his marriage and he definitely didn't want that to happen. Nomatter how angry Emily was, he knew that she had much love for him. Her love couldn't just fade away in a matter of hours. Nathan was remotely determined not to give up on his marriage. He was willing to do whatever it would take. Right now he had to pay Myra a visit.20
Nathan was the head computer technician at the Microsoft Corporate Office Technical Support Center. He had been employed there for a little over nine years and he was deticated to his job position. The biggest mistake that Nathan had made was the night that Emily went out of state to visit her parents. Doyle Sykes, one of Nathan's co-workers had invited him to a party that a family member of his was having. At first Nathan had no intentions of attending the party until Doyle kept applying pressure. Finally, Nathan said what the heck. Emily was out of state and he would only be home alone so he decided to accept Doyle's invitation. What could it hurt? Nathan thought.21
THE PARTY22
Nathan was handsome as always. Nomatter what he wore it brought much electrofying attention with his protruding muscular body. After about five shots of taquia Nathan was feeling quite mellow. Without warning, a very desiring provocative looking female with such a sensuous body approached him and asked it he would have a dance with her. It had been years since Nathan had actually danced. He was kind of skeptical to accept but he proceeded to follow her on the dance floor. It was a blessing that by the time they made it out there that the DJ had started up a slow song. That was a plus for Nathan because he hadn't forgotten how to maneuver that style of dance.23
While embracing this mysterious woman on the dance floor, Nathan couldn't help but to admire the way her blissful body was stimulating his male instincts. The lavishing smell of her soft perfume danced all around his nostrils. Nathan felt like he was being mesmerized into a deep coma and he didn't want to wake up out of it no time soon. Engulfing the movement of her tantilizing body, Nathan found himself pressing her closer against his arousing body. This feeling felt unbelievable to Nathan and he was beginning to loose himself into her mysterious world.24
Nathan didn't know whether he was relieved or destracted when the slow song ended. All he knew was whatever was going on out there it surely felt good. For some reason his mind was yarning for the DJ to please let all the following songs be slow jams. Wlaking back over to the bar, Nathan's co-worker Doyle joined him with another shot of taquila.25
DOYLE :26
So I see that you are enjoying the party. Aren't you glad you decided to come?27
NATHAN :28
Oh yeh it's alright. I haven't felt like this in a very long time. Thank you for inviting me man. It's much better than sitting at home looking at the four walls you know?29
DOYLE :30
For sure that's why I wouldn't accept no for an answer. I think you really needed this man.31
NATHAN :32
No doubt, I agree with ya! ....Hey Doyle, do you know that sexy ass female I was just slow dancing with? She is so damn sexy!33
**** Doyle began to laugh ****34
DOYLE :35
Of course I do. That's my cousin Myra. She's visiting from Atlanta.36
NATHAN :37
Your cousin? You mean the one I just came off the dance floor with? The female with those vuluptuous breast trying to break out of that low cut blouse?38
DOYLE :39
Yep, that's the one.40
NATHAN :41
What was her name again?42
DOYLE :43
Myra44
NATHAN :45
Myra huh? Sexy Myra! Wow! She's very hott I tell ya.46
DOYLE :47
Well it seems as though she's feeling you to Nathan. I saw her approaching you asking for a dance. That should tell you something.48
NATHAN :49
You're right, she was the one who asked me to dance with her. 50
DOYLE :51
Just say the word and I'll have her to come over here and keep you company.52
NATHAN :53
Naw I better not. I haven't forgotten that I'm a married man. I don't want to lead her on and I'm already tempted by her sexiness. I think it would be safer for me to just leave well enough alone.54
DOYLE :55
Alright I respect that but if you should change your mind, just give me a holla and I'll set things up for ya.56
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**Doyle gave Nathan a wink as he walked away from the bar**58
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The night was drawing to and end. Nathan had readlly enjoyed himself. Getting ready to exit the door, Nathan heard a seductive toned voice calling out his name. As he turned around, to his surprise it was the same desirable fine ass female he had previously slow danced with.60
MYRA :61
Hey, are you leaving now?62
NATHAN :63
Yeh, I've had enough fun for the night. Time for me to turn in although I had a really great time.64
MYRA :65
I'm glad to hear that. And thank you once again for the dance. I really enjoyed it.66
NATHAN :67
So did I. It was my pleasure..... I understand that you're Doyle's cousin from Atlanta if I remember correctly?68
MYRA :69
Yes, that would be me. I came down for the party but I had already made plans to stay a couple of weeks. I'm on vacation.70
NATHAN :71
That's great. Do you visit down here much being that you have family here?72
MYRA :73
I do now since my mother just moved back here a couple of months ago.74
NATHAN :75
Auh I see.76
MYRA :77
My ride is not ready to leave yet so if you don't mind do you think you could drop me off at my hotel room? If it's out of your way, don't worry about it.78
NATHAN :79
No I don't mind. I mean being that I'm getting ready to leave anyway. What hotel are you staying at?80
MYRA :81
Pleasure Island. It's right off the main strip close to the beach area.82
NATHAN :83
Okay no problem I believe I can handle that.84
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12:45 AM86
PLEASURE ISLAND HOTEL87
Nathan had parked his car in the nearest available parking space. On the ride to the hotel, Myra had offered Nathan to come to her room and have a cup of hot tea with her. She convinced him that it would keep him from having a hangover by morning. Nathan took her up on her offer after telling her how much he had consumed at the party. He definitely didn't want to wake up with a damning headache. Nathan remember those kind of times a couple of years back.88
Myra's hotel room was on the second floor. Upon approaching her room door Nathan hadn't realize just how close he was behind her until she accidentally dropped her key card and bent down to pick it up. Nathan's thick dick aroused very bountiful in his pants. He tried to do everything possible to keep Myra from noticing it so he backed up a few steps.89
Nathan made hisself comfortable on the lavishing love seat that was across from the comfortable looking king size bed. Myra told him that she was going to change into something a bit more comfortable. While Nathan was flickering through the channels with the tv remote, until his attention was disrrupted. Myra came out of the bathroom wearing only a sheer see through netted like t-shirt with matching sheer netted thongs. The sexy nighty or whatever she would call it showed every revealing secret that she had. Her big breast set at attention as if they were milk jugs. They appeared to be so luscious and firm. Her hairy vagina was the prettiest he had ever seen before peeping through the sheer of the thongs. The sight of her blissful body invaded Nathan's intriging mind.90
MYRA :91
Okay, this is much better. I'm going to get the tea ready now. Are you alright over there?92
NATHAN :93
Oh yeh I'm good.94
***Nathan knew he was lying. Of course he wasn't alright***95
MYRA :96
I understand that you're a computer technician specialist. Do you like it?97
NATHAN :98
Auh ..yeh I love it. What kind of work do you do?99
MYRA :100
I'm a social worker at the Department of Human Resources.101
NATHAN :102
Hummm interesting. Do you like it?103
MYRA :104
I love it. I've been working there for two years.105
NATHAN :106
So just out of curiosty, are you married? Have any kids?107
MYRA :108
I've been divorced for over three years now. Happily divorced that is. And no I don't have any kids. My ex-husband and I lost our child a couple of months after we were married.109
NATHAN :110
I'm really sorry to hear that. I'm sure it must have been a hurtful thing.111
MYRA :112
At the time it really was. I was very emotional over it. It's never easy loosing someone that's so close to your heart.113
NATHAN :114
I completely understand. Did you have a miscarraige?115
MYRA :116
No, he was borned premature and died a month later.117
NATHAN :118
I'm so sorry. That's an awful thing to have happened.119
MYRA :120
I've healed alot since then. Maybe it was for the best considering the marriage didn't workout. my ex-husband was very abusive. I'm just thankful that I don't have any ties with him now.121
NATHAN :122
That's terrible.123
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The tea was done and Myra joined Nathan on the love seat while they both began to sip out of their coffee mugs. Nathan was trying very hard to hold his composer but it was becoming very unbearable. This woman sitting so close to him was so breath taking. Nathan was trying to hurry up and finish his tea so he could get home and take a cold shower. The third time that Nathan placed his hot mug on the coaster that sat on the center table right in front of the love seat, Myra gently turned his face to face her and planted a very seductive and passionate kiss on his manly lips. Taken by surprise, Nathan couldn't resist this sinful temptation. How could he? This woman was so sexually paralyzing until before Nathan knew it they had made it to the king size bed embracing each other while yet kissing as if their lips had been glued together with crazy glue. How could this wrong feeling feel so damn right? At this very moment Nathan was captivated and so easily attained.125
Both heated bodies were pressing against each other in absolute nakedness. The chemistry between them grew powerfully. As Myra laid flat on her back, Nathan was eager to taste those big juicy desiring breast. He squeezed them while sucking them left to right. This was driving Myra insane. Several exciting moans slipped out of her mouth. The sound enticed Nathan to the point that all he wanted to do was satisfy her sexual needs. Nathan began to caress every inch of her undescribable body. It felt so lustful and sensationable. Myra couldn't hold back any longer, she begged Nathan to fuck her. She wanted to feel his thick long dick inside of her hot needy pussy. Taking a deep breath Nathan began to give Myra exactly what she desired. The warmth of Myra's tight pussy brought sure satisfation to Nathan as he continued to penetrate his dick inside her. What a wholesome and fulfilling sexual encounter? Myra's passionate moans reversed into painful pleasure. Nathan's hard dick was packing inside of Myra'a tight pussy to the point where she couldn't run from it. He was plunging every inch of his dick to it's deepest destination. Myra screamed out several hardcore screams but it was as if Nathan couldn't here her. He continued his plunging strokes and deep penestrating motions. It came to the point where Myra was trying desperately to get away from Nathan but he held her limpful body as tight as he could to him while yet applying forceful plunges inside her hurtful pussy.126
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3:00 AM128
Nathan suddenly awoke realizing that he wasn't in his own bed. When it dawned on him that he had previously just made passionate love to the beautiful naked lustful body that laid next to him, he knew it was time for him to get dressed and get home before day break. Before gathering himself to make movement, he felt a warm soft hand stroking his now awake big dick. The feeling was very stimulating and intensifying. Nathan knew there was no way that he could even attempt to stop her. After several minutes had passed, Nathan felt a pair of luscious wet and warm lips engulfing his dick. Wow! Nathan thought to himself. What a great feeling. Before Myra could really put a mouth work on him, Nathan had exploded his cum inside her juicy mouth. Myra swallowed every sip of the thick cum that was released in her mouth with sincere sexual pride.129
MYRA :130
So how did you enjoy it?131
NATHAN :132
It was great! I mean everything was just great! You're a very fine and impressive woman. I really did enjoy the time that we spent here tonight, this morning whatever we shall call it.133
****** They both laugh *******134
MYRA :135
So did I Nathan. I'm glad that you decided to come up and join me for a hot cup of tea.136
NATHAN :137
I really got loaded at the party but I did have a great time.138
MYRA :139
That's good to hear. I'm just happy that you showed up. You made my night Nathan.140
NATHAN :141
Well it's time for me to get going now. I need to make it home.142
MYRA :143
Why do you have to leave right now? You can at least wait until morning. I had planned to make us breakfast.144
NATHAN :145
That's very thoughtful and sweet of you but I'm gonna have to pass. I really need to get home.146
MYRA :147
You make it seem as though you have a wife and kids at home or something. Relax and just let me pamper you for the rest of the day.148
NATHAN :149
I'm sorry Myra but I thought you knew that I actually do have a wife.150
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Myra was in total shock. She had no idea that this tall dark handsome fine ass man whom she had brought back to her hotel room and fucked for hours was a married man. In disbelief, Myra jumped up from where she was sitting on the king size bed grabbing her silk robe to cover her naked body. Nathan noticed the disapproving look on Myra's face. He honestly thought she knew that he was married. He was almost sure that if he forgot to tell her that Doyle definitely had to have mentioned it. Nathan felt kind of perversed with all that had taken place but he knew that it was time for him to get home so he began to get dressed.152
NATHAN :153
Myra, listen I'm truly sorry but I definitely thought that you knew I was married. I thought maybe Doyle had mentioned it to you at the party lastnight.154
MYRA :155
No Doyle never mentioned anything to be concerning your marital status and neither did you. Actually it wasn't Doyle's responsibility it was yours. Doyle wasn't the one who came to my room and fucked the shit out of me for hours! I didn't just suck Doyle's big dick and swallow his cum! It was your responsibility NATHAN!!!!! YOURS!!!! NOW GET THE HELL OUT OF MY ROOM !!!!!156
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Myra was infuriated with the now known fact that she had just allowed a married handsome ass man fuck her tight pussy until it blead while screaming out for mercy from the hardcore pounding. How could she had been so stupid? Myra gave Nathan an unresolved look with a bittersweet smile as he exited the room door.158
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Comments
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Nicely done....
good twist at end.....
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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Interesting
An interesting layout here of a film script/novel. Interesting read too.
I do feel sorry for Nathan poor fellow I thought his wife was too hard on him; Ok he shouldn’t go messing around… and then a sexually paralysing woman comes onto him and beds him and then tells him to get lost!
Maybe a strong woman turns him on! I wouldn’t want to be in his shoes with those two on his case…
Although at the beginning his says he needs to visit Myra. Then he meets a Myra that part through me for a second. It would be interesting to learn how he gets himself out of his predicament!
Happy Writing!
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m sorry but im gna have to either DQ or ignore u coz i had 2 change my age just to access this page. im sure this is a great story and some parts that i read while coming down to the comment were ok so thanks for entering a great piece. my apologies. any more stories you write i would love to read.....'
sorry
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Loved the build-up
I liked the way you wrote this... almost like a screenplay. It helped create a mental movie for me as if I was seeing it all on a screen in front of me. I also think it was very effective that the hot sex was not rushed. There was a build up of dialogue and rising tension... very effective at conveying the reality of such an experience... gradually moving from temptation to submission. A few typos here and there, such as "deticated" instead of "dedicated" but that is tiny stuff that can be fixed so easily. A very nice piece here and a hot read!
beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 3, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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OMG...PURE GENIOUS ... I loved it from te start to the finish..the sex whoa mindblowing...
I WANT FUCKING MORE MORE MORE

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