I looked up, keeping his glare. Tears streamed down my cheeks as he held my arm, I glanced down, my lip trembling. He threw down my arm and stomped off.1
Turning back he yelled "You promised me Carry, your promised on us and our love that you wouldn't do it, I can't take all this shit anymore!"2
I was stunned I didn't know whether he just broke up with me or need to be alone for awhile. I stammered "I'm sorry! I didn't know how to take in everything that's going on, I'm sorry-please don't leave me!" I fell down in heaps of tears sniffling, waiting to see what he was going to do next.3
He turned back around ready to leave me behind forever, then something stopped him, he came back and knelt down beside me.4
"Carry I love you so much but cutting yourself scares me, it hurt5
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awww that was good girl.. i loved it, it is amazin how one person can stop someone from doin something stupid... love is just crazy and weird like that it makez u do some crazy thingz u did amazin job on this piece i will alwayz remember this one cause that is how good it was and how well it struck me.. well im outtie
-*~"Love Ya Bye"~*-
Tabby Kat -
oooo this is sooo cute! i wish that we all could have boyfriends like this. Man. This is greawt, i liked it a lot. What made you write it? you just felt like it? hmm i guess i get that. Matt. That is a sexy name
well gonzo i ilked it a lot, you should write more short stories!
love ya
Becho -
Wow, this is sorta like my story. Well not entirely but it's kinda along those lines. *sigh* as I'm writing this I really want to but I'm not because of the promise that I have made. This is a great write
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