My Beautiful Metaphor

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Eyes are the gateway to the soul, heart, and mind.

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HELLO! I'm a girl of 'course. You know me Tay Tay!

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  • UnEdibleChick
    March 8, 2008

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    This is beautiful. Great job Japanese peach! My friends write the best Stories/poems/qoutes/metaphors/other!!!

    Good job and keep up the good work!


  • Taylor Renee
    November 1, 2007

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    OMD OMD OMD!!!!!!


    THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL..

    ...Between you and me, (person I do know XD) this is my favorite so far. Not kidding.

    You obviously know me....eyes are a fascination of mine, actually.

    I don't know who you are Anonomous contest, though it doesn't have to be!

    Thank you so much for contributing this to my contest, and I wish you luck!


    xoxo
    tay

  • Carmen Boyer
    October 31, 2007
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    short and to the point. wonderful job


    • Beneath The Mask silver member
      November 2, 2007
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      thanks crystalgodess! I just thought of what I would write if it were poetry so yeah!