"I can never see you again!" I screamed at him while throwing a flower vase. It smashed into the wall right next to the door, breaking into hundreds of pieces.1
"What did I do?" He yelled as he ducked from my throw.2
I glared at him from behind the couch. "You know exactly what you did. You slept with her!"3
His expression was confusion and amusement. "Who?" He smiled. 4
"You know EXACTLY who!" I screamed, but after a minute my voice gave out and I collapsed to the floor, gasping for breath.5
My boyfriend rushed to my side and held me in his arms. But before I could relax, I pushed him away. "No! I must not let you near me." I slowly stood up and stumbled toward my small kitchen. 6
"You need to calm down hun," His english accent was smooth. "I have no clue what in the world your talking about. Why are you being a bugger?"7
Author notes
not done but enjoy
What do you think?
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I like it so far. You really feel the emotions and sympathsize with this poor woman. I'm already interested inthe plot of the story, thats a sign of a good writer.
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I like it! You should write more! Just so you know, I'm the other judge in Coffee Cat's contest. You did a good job - you should write more, though. It seems like this will turn out to be an interesting story!
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Thank you! I will soon
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Keep it up! I want to read more of this story!
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Okay!
I have had so much trouble trying to get on to update my stories and such. I have my schooling going on and I have a horse show coming up in a couple of weeks that I really need to prepare for. So I am sorry ahead of time if it is a while before I update
<3
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I'm already interested in the plot of the story and that's just the beginning so you bet I'm definitely looking forward to read the rest..!!!
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I think this is a very good beginning and I hope you will go much further with this story. There's some good development that can happen. I'm not sure how the couple's relationship is going (since the boy seems very dumbfounded) but I'd like to find out. Keep me updated!
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Thanks Angel!
I am going to continue it possibly tonight after work.
Unique, well thats wonderful if i have you interested with only this bit. Keep an eye out for more!
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