Life without That Boy would drive me crazy1
Up a wall2
Delusional3
Take away That Boy and you take away my heart4
My will to live5
My power to succeed6
Me without That Boy is like a pen without the ink7
A hot dog without the bun8
Or a poem without the meaning9
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Simply pointless.11
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The hot dog without the bun sort of ruins the poeticness.
Wow, the meaning this holds is wonderful. Great work! It's was amazing ^_^ -
thats reallllllllly good
I think you should replace the hot dog and bun part to something different -
Hmmmmm this is cool
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The greatest poem EVER?
Yes it is.
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That was very cute, the hot dog without the bun part made me smile.
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