She showed him the cut on her ankle, it was bleeding...black. He stared at the cut, expecting, as everyone else had, red.1
As Sasha had many times before, she began to explain;2
"When we are born, we bleed pink. When we experience any kind of affection, our blood turns red. Usually, right when we are born, some sort of maternal loving is thrust upon us. The blood of most people stays this color, the red is just enhanced as we begin to experience affection for others. But some of us..."3
"Some of us learn to live without affection. Some of us never learn to trust, never learn to laugh, to love."4
"And some of us never learn to bleed."5
She sliced just a little of the skin of of his forearm. The nine year old started to tremble as he stared up at Sasha, his eyes wide. Knowing he could never again really belong.6
The blood was pure white, the total absence of darkness.7
"Come on Alex, hop in."8
Nearly petrified, Alex took Sasha's hand and she pulled him into the monstorous bus.9
"Welcome to the land of the loveless."
Author notes
Another really rough sketch of something. Not edited yet either. Sugggestions always welcome. Hope ya like it! btw, I felt like I had to use Lise and Sahsa's names, so I used Sasha for this. Please don't be too mad! lol.
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eh..... thank you , i am very complimented. write more, i don't really know what 2 think right now.
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sorry, i needed something to use your name in. lol.
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uhhhhhhhhhhhh this was really quite random but right now i feel just like the soo aloe and loveles, but abey thats a good thing no boys to bother us or mabey its not
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really good, but you might want to add on a bit about the ears. do u know what i'm talkin' bout?
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lol.
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woah, kind of depressing, but very promising! I like it! nice, want to see more
also, are you continuing that 'i love you lise' thing? it sounds good, but is it just a short story? jw
i'm on the school computer!
lol
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