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"Stop". I screamed. "You're going to kill me. I can't breathe". "Shut up" he said. " I want you dead". I was so afraid. We were in my truck. I had just told my fiance I was leaving him for good. 2
"The only way you're leaving me is if you're dead" he said and started choking me. I swear I saw the light that night. He held me captive. Kidnapped on the road. Hickey on my head, busted lip, black eye, swollen nose, broken nail, broken soul. All alone. After this I still stayed a fool for love, but not anymore3
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This was very much true and hard to express in 100 words I hope my story helps someone else.
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I surely hope so too. I can tell why you left him. I hope things have worked out better for you. And I also hope that that...well I don't suppose there's a word strong enough for him, but I hope that he got what he deserved.
This was excellently done and I think you wrote it wonderfully. I especially liked how at the end you were speaking about all the physical things that happened, and then you mention broken soul. I believe that opens people's eyes, at least mine, to know that it's more than just your body that's broken it's also your heart and soul.
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Wow! This was such a descriptive piece you have here, I am so sorry to hear that this happened to you. I ope whoever did this to you gets what he deserves in the long run. Keep your head up. You are so strong to have gotten through this along with all the dark things of your past. I commend you because that took a lot of strength and courage. To still be the sweet lovingcaring person you are today. God bless you.
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so sorry to hear this.When possesive people lose their minds in rage nothing can stop them.I have a knife scar to prove it.Thanks for sharing this piece of your soul.Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
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Thnks so much for commenting on my piece. That was a very hard time in my life. It's kind of hard to express those feeling in only 100's because the pain and anguish I felt was so much more than 100 words could say.
I'm still feeling some of it because that wasn't too long ago.
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wow this is moving. its really short and its good. Like I have said many times before if you can say it in three lines then thats all you will ever need.. Good job
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It sounds as if it was hard to express and hard to write. Good luck in the contest.
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