It was a perfect starry night, the kind of night she only saw on the fount of the picture cards her dad sent her from France. Billie wasn’t sure exactly where she was, or how she had gotten there, all she new was she was in the most beautiful place she had ever seen. The moon light was reflecting off the crystal lake waters unto the girl and the field of daisies she was standing in.1
Billie was wearing the dress her mom gave her for her seventh birthday. It was green and covered in beautiful daises. She watch, as she was spinning, how the colors of her dress blurred with the colors of the field. The cool sweet, night air fell around her face as she tumbled to the ground in laughter. Her long blond hair was flowing over her perfectly innocent face. She could hardly ever remember being this happy.2
It was there laying amidst the flowers her dress disappearing into the grass, that Billie realized she was alone, truly alone. No mom, no dad, no sisters or brothers, she was for once in her life completely alone. Yet, knowing she should worry. Knowing she should be scared. She wasn’t, especially in this place, this beautiful place. She got up and started to walk around.3
"So what if there not here, I’m big enough. I can take care of my self. If dad never would have left us I would be at home with him instead." Billie said to her self, as she walk away from the lake. "Besides I deserve time to myself, seven brothers and sisters, what where they thinking." She was coming up on the cold dark woods to the other side of the field. And that’s when she saw it. Her favorite doll laying in the grass. 4
"Susie, Susie how did you get out here?" Billie looked the doll over as dusted off some dead fall leafs out of it’s stringy red hair. It was missing a button eye, and wearing the same kind of flowery dress as Billie. "Come to think of it Susie, how did I get here?" Billie said, going over the face of her doll one last time. "You really do look a mess." 5
Billie gasp as she looked up, "Where, where are we Susie?" She ask gasping the doll. The trees of the forest where so think she could no longer see the stars or the moon light she had bask in before. She looked back for the path back to the lake, but it all looked the same as she spun around. She seemed to hear the wind whisper.6
"Someone in the dark" 7
"What was that, Susie?" said Billie as her dark blue eyes scanned the trees.8
"You are not alone " whispered the strange, wind like voice.9
Then Billie heard it, what sent a chill up her spin, and sent her in to a panic. A loud, seemingly wolf like cry, a high pitch, "HEE Hee" Billie dropped Susie and hit the ground running. She could here foot steps somewhere around her. That’s when she heard a distantly evil voice whisper, "Umm, little Susie" 10
Billie, thought about her doll. She thought about going back, but she just kept running.11
She could tell the creature was on her tail, and as she though this another soul wrenching noise was made "Woooh" Billie, hide behind the nearest tree. As she bent around it, she could see something almost blinding on the creatures right hand. It was a white leather glove, covered in white jewels. It seemed to give off a mystical kind of light. It made her feel nice, she wanted to touch it. But as soon as these thoughts crossed her mind the wind whispered again.12
"Dangerous" Billie could see why they would say that. The creature had long black hair, and yellow eyes, but as it sniffed the air with that, that thing she presumed a noise, it looked horrifying. Billie let out a gasp, and those yellow eyes feel on her. 13
"P.Y.T" said the creature with a smile. The creature fell on her like a speed demon. Billie fell back against the tree, as the creature began to "Smile" At this word, Billy tried to force a grin. The creature looked into her face, "Who is it??" It said with a finger of the white glove pointing at her.14
"B...B, B, Billie..." She said in a whisper.15
"B...B...Billie who’s?" Said the creature with a sadistic smile.16
"B..Billie Jean, sir." Said Billie as she closed her eyes. 17
"Humm, and what is B..Billie Jean doing in my woods." 18
"I...I don’t know. I got lost sir." Billie replied in a very shaky voice as the creature horrid face filled with pleasure. Billie could swear she heard the wind again. 19
"Dangerous"20
"A lost child, in my woods. You are mine, the girl is mine." It said placing both hands besides the girls head. "Scream"21
Without a thought Billie screamed as loud as she could, and the trees started to shake. The forest became alive with movement. Butterflies started to float everywhere closing in closer and closer to her and the creature. "What are they?" Ask Billie as she notices they looked more like ghost then butterflies.22
"These" the creature said "are mine. The lost children." It started to put the glove on Billies dress, she felt something in her stomach "And now you are another part of me. Give in to me."23
Billie heard the voices of the wind once again. "Dangerous,... bad,... dangerous,... bad." She could tell the voices where coming from the butterflies, from his lost children.24
As the creature was humming a song she knew, don’t stop tell you get enough. Billie felt her eyes getting heavy and tried to fight, but it was too late. The white glove was in her now, passing though her dress and skin, the last thing she saw was butterflies flying out form inside her. As she felt her soul empty. 25
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As she felt a sharp pain in her side Billie woke up. She was in a room she new, red sheets on the bed, and wood floor. She took a deep breath. "It was all a dream," she held Susie tight, "Oh, I’m so glad to see you. Then rolled over to fall a sleep.27
"Ahhhhhhh!!!!!" There was the man, the creature from her dream. 28
He jumped up, and in a soft sweet voice said. "What, what is it Billie," 29
"Beat it get out of here." She screamed30
"Billie, it okay, it’s me. Uncle Michael, don’t you know me."31
"Leave me alone" She screamed,32
"It’s okay hun, it human nature to be scared" Said Michael33
"Michel, Michael please, Michael." 34
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"Michel, Michael please, Mr. Jackson, It’s time to get up."36
"Billie Jean is not my lover," Yelled Michael 37
"Yes I know," Said a tall man in a suit as he chose something for Michel to wear "But if we don’t get you to court on time there will be blood on the dance floor."38
"You mean it was all a dream, just a bad dream." Said the super star. 39
"I’m afraid not," he said as he showed Michael to the wind.40
Looking down on the street Michael saw picket signs covered with "We hate Mike." "Protect our kids." "Children are to be love, not for love" Michael fell to the floor and started to cry.
Author notes
Okay, firt thing first, I'm sorry to all you M.J. fans, this was just for fun, so no hate mail please.
Next, the insperatin for this was the contest and thriller the video.
And last, if you are really bord there are a number of Michael Jackson song titles hiden within the story, so it's like find waldo, okay I'm a dork. Hope you all liked this as much as I liked reading it. Nice contest.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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this was a very... odd story. i liked it though ^.^
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wow... i started this and its very very good, however.. my eyes are slowly closing on me, telling me its bed time... so ill be back tomorrow to finish!!! awesome job so far... i'll finish my comment tomorrow
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Wow! Like nothing I have ever seen before! I'm just gob-smaked! 'lost for words' All I can say is it was great! lol Thanks for entering x
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Very talented write. I like the twist to it... It took me awhile to start catching on to the MJ thing. Very cool. It was a very entertaining story, but it could use some editing for typo's. Either way... I really enjoyed the read.
Blessings and *stomps -
Well, thanks for the great comment, I wanted something dark and funny for this contest. I think I did well, thanks for the comment.
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Woah ... that was very weird. But very good, too.
I liked it when it first started out, it was all so surreal and dark. Then the Micheal Jackson things came into play and I almost laughed. I read the white glove stuff and thought "Oh god, please don't make her name Billie Jean..."
A really great comedy story ... kinda twisted the way you have the butterflies as his "children" and they have to give in to him ...
I'm not a Micheal Jackson fan (and I DO think he's guilty), but that was a really awesome story. -
good
good Job!!!!!!!!
P.S can you read some of my work?



