Innocence

Look at you just lying there.1

So innocent without a care.2

I pray this world be kind to you.3

May love be all you find.4

Look at you just lying there.5

So lonely and insecure.6

I pray this world be kind to you.7

May love be all you find.8

Look at you just lying there.9

So peaceful and serene.10

I prayed this world be kind to you.11

May love be all you'd find.12

Watching as they bury you13

A silent tear falls for you.14

I'm sorry this world was cruel15

I'm sorry this pain was there.16

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  • Forgotten Anomaly
    October 29, 2007

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    Sad. You should say who and why they died. Also you use the word you at the end of the lines to often it makes the peom seam repetative.