It was a dark and stormy night
She was scared of the coming light1
Daytime was a horror
She liked the dark so much more
She couldn't stand the sun
Into her soul it did bore2
It was a dark and stormy night
But at least for now, she was alright3
For now, right now, it was always NOW
She couldn't stand the coming day
She didn't want the lonliness or the sorrow
The world saying she's not okay4
It was a dark and stormy night
And she was hoping the monsters might really bite5
She didn't want to go through the day
Alone and lonely, only one
And as she fell asleep and dreamed
She wished the night would never be done6
Then away went the dark and stormy night
And out came the dreaded light7
Forever she lived
Always dreading the light
Until that one day
When she was taught how to fight8
How to fight the fear
And how to fight the dread
And finally learned to listen
If only to what HE said9
This boy, so sweet
Made everything alright
This boy, so sweet
Taught her how to fight10
Fight, not the light
But the sadness11
Fight, not only for herself
But for her happiness12
This boy, so sweet
Her one true love
Turned this pigeon
Into a beautiful dove
Author notes
Well, this was random.
For an AWESOME contest!
Um...This is a pretty long poem. For me, I mean! I hope you enjoyed!
A contest entry
- It was a dark and stormy night by potaytee.
122 points, ended October 31, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Poems... by Surreal Rhapsody.
100 points, ended November 26, 2007, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think of it? Please! lol!
Comments
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This was a pritty good write. You entered it in my friends contest lol. I like your use of words on this. This poem is really descriptive. Keep writing and good luck in the contest!!!
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this is awsome, I like it keep it up
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This is cute wr4ite more of this piece
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That was beautiful!!! I loved it!!! You are soooooo good! I was sucked in right away! It had sucha happy ending! I loved it! Good luck on the contest!!! ^.^ ^. ^.^ ^.^ ^.^ ^.^ ^.^
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AW!
I LOVE the end! Very cute! Very deep, very cool! I really enjoyed the flow and OMG, EVERYTHING about it! Great job! Oh, and AWESOME!
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Woah, the background blinded my eyes for a moment, lol. I like the poem. Great job!
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great poem! yes it was really cool..... don't know about funny......... but yes a v. good poem that i really enjoyed.
good luck
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Awww. I love this, truly do. Especially the last two lines, they were beautiful! This WHOLE POEM WAS BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE IT! No suggestions required. I love it.
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Very unique write, tay! Yeah, the repetition of Dark and Stormy night is awesome. It rocks my socks! And I like having my socks rocked!
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COOL!!!!!!!!!
I really liked that poem, It wasn't to long. It was unique and I really enjoyed reading it.
Good Luck -
Oh I enjoyed it alot!!
You will certainly win that contest.
It would be nice if you made a story out of this poem.
I loved the end also
'Her one true love
Turned this pigeon
Into a dove'
Love it
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