How It All Began.

I was sitting on the corner of the couldesac.I had just moved there.I hadn't met anybody yet although I had seen my next-door neighbors.1

"Hey!You wanna play hide-and-seek?" my neighbor asked.2

"No.I don't seem to remeber your name so please go away."I mumbled looking up at the brown haired girl before me.3

"Brianna."She said looking disapointed."You sure?You can meet Jenn and Nikki."4

"No.Now go."I said.5

To be continued

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  • Thwack
    October 24, 2007

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    That's great, what nice neighbors. The first thing they want to do is play hide-and-seek and not see you. I would've said "No", too.

    Better yet, you could have said, "Sure, you go hide." Then continue sitting on that corner.