The gentle humming of the engine didn't come close to hiding the screams of passion rising into the night. The leather interior got hot and sweaty with each movement. The windows obviously fogged up at this point, glinted as the moonlight shone through them basking two naked bodies in a muted glow. 1
'Are you sure they won't find us?' Alexia gasped
'Possibly. Why, are you worried?' Alonso's thick Spanish accent mumbled as he thrust vigorously, surprisingly agile for such a muscular man in a confined space. Alexia didn't answer. She didn't need to. The pounding of her heart gave away her true feelings. She loved the excitement and she loved every second of what was happening. Living her ultimate fantasy. Having sex with a Spanish racing driver in the back of a car.2
Alonso zipped up his trousers and inhaled the night air. Another cheap slut in the bag he thought. Being a professional racing driver did have its perks. Beautiful women, £45 million a year, not to mention living his childhood dream. Pulling out a pack of cigarettes- she was better than he expected- he contemplated keeping this one for a while, Ashely or Alex or something like that was young, hot, and the newest member of the McCorman team due to her extensive knowledge on cars, just what he needed to boost his image. “Yes” he thought, “a month or two, I'll get her known and then dump her.” Extinguishing the butt of his cigarette he walk back to the car.3
Alexia found her bra hooked on to the steering wheel. Catching her breath she leaned over the stick and found her matching panties. Lacy red, the same colour of the exterior of the Ferrari 612 Scaglietti she had just had the best sex of her life in. “It's not going to last” she told herself firmly. She'd never been a dreamer and just took life as it came, but this was the biggest break she had been landed in a long time. Having just been signed to McCorman on a one year £9million pound contract to help design a new car life seemed to be looking up, but she wasn't going to kid herself that the hottest driver in F1 was going to fall head over heals for her. On the other hand, being one of the only women at McCorman she needed a good reason to be taken seriously, and Alonso was as good as any. “Besides” she thought “I do love the feel of leather.” She pulled on her top and waited for his return.
Author notes
First story I have ever put on here, so I am open to all constructive criticisms. I think this will be a five part series so I'll keep you posted.
Peace
Ellie
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Ok, this is minor but a spelling mistake I must point out none-the-less. You have heels spelled improperly. Now that that is out of the way...
Your story is fast paced. I enjoyed seeing the perspective of each character, it really sets the stage for more to come. I'll look forward to catching the next stories as you post them. -
great story
this is great..cant wait for more of it.beginning: 5.
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4/5
A few grammar mistakes, but more than good descriptions. Good work.
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woooooooooot! wow .. .. this was really gud, i luved the detail hehe go her bein da only women lol .. tho i HATE to agree with.. thwit ..-_- ... the start were the engine revving was kinda confusing. maybeh u could expand a lil on that.. newho all over it was awsum, keeeep on writing!! so i can read
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yeh i think ima delete that bit. Re-reading it, it makes no sense. Actually ima re-write it and explain it in the next chapter, so now you have to read the rest!
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Hmm, she wants to be taken seriously so the first thing she does is hop in the backseat with the Latin lover? I was hoping you were going to end it with her disconnecting his radiator hose or something since she's an ace with cars.
Also, although the visual was decent at the start, I don't get why the engine was revving when they were in the back? Unless this was at the track? With other drivers just practicing and noticing the fogged up windows? Oh yeah, that'll make them take her seriously.
Still, this is your first story and you've got definite potential. Your spelling and structure is good, so that already puts you l(e)aps ahead of your peers. -
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wow my first comment. Yeh i get what you mean about the engine. Sleeping with the head driver does make her be taken seriously though, it gives her status and a certain amount of control. thanks for your advice much appreciated!
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