I'm lying here in bed while this well experienced hand traces every length of my upper body. My legs are beginning to shake as it rubs my two milk chocolate covered nipples. I'm really excited and my button begins to pulsate as it works its way to my navel. It makes it's way down to my leg and begins to squeeze just a little bit. Then it runs across my firm backside. Excitedly I roll over on my back and, open my legs. Now there's not one hand but two. They take my panties and pull them down right near my calf. By now, I'm on fire excited as to what may come next. So these fingers trail their way all the way up to my breasts. They linger for a few seconds and then they reach my mouth. So I open up and let them in, now they're really moist. They work their way back down. And start to play with my button. When all of a sudden, I hear a noise so I remove my hand and put on my pants, to go and answer the door.1
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Choice# 4 Joe is a boofhead
Oh don't look at me like that! Yes, it is a true story. I get lonely sometimes
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LOL! Priceless ending! I didn't even see it coming. Just awesome.
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Yes, they really do. Who wants to be interupted at a time like that? Lmao. I know this was going to have everyone going. I actually got the inspiration the day I wrote it because I had just gtten disconnected from the internet and while laying there waiting to be reconnected my hands were exploring my body. But any way enough details. Thanks a lot for commenting.
LadyRage
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lol, i definitly wasn't expecting the ending, but i think it's awesome! hehe, don't interruptions suck?!
sweetdemise
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lol, I liked that, you drew me in and then...wham, isn't life just like that? Always interupting important indevers
Good luck in the contest!
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I was imagining your boyfriend having his way with you. Then you throw the twist in and I find out its just you. That is ok. We know our bodies better than our mates. We know what we want and how we like it. Now that damn door bell had to ring.... I get lonely as well. This was really a gret write. I hope you got rid of them and had fun without anymore interruptions. HEHEHE Good luck in the contest.
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Hahaha... I love this! I have had so many of those untimely "interruptions" over the years. Not so much nowadays!
This was great! I loved it! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you. Exactly the point that I wanted to get across. I will read your works and return the favor.
LadyRage
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Thanks for your opinion although this was a true experience that I wrote about so had I said your hands I would've been telling a tale.
LadyRage
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Thanks CJ. I guess I should write about true experience more often huh? Thanks for commenting on my work I'll stop by and return the favor.
LadyRage
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very good
Well written. We all get lonely at one time or another. Certainly does not do any harm to use personal experience as a basis for writing. Sure makes the tale more believable.
thanks,
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I was hoping they were our hands. The story is much more interesting that way.
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different
Hehe you get lonely sometimes nothing wrong with that lol. For a while I thought it was about you and someone else, but I was fooled. Very good description. Much luvs- CJ
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