It's September.Carefree childhood is the light-green hue of the almond's leaves.Flowering stalks punctuated the head of leaves which soon will become dark green - the vibrant and productive years of maturity.1
Before departing, the dark-green leaves [those that have successfully weathered time's rage and storms] would take the flaming hue of experience and wisdom - beauty unmatched!2
Then the final spiralling of the radiant leaves downwards [life's ultimate end!] would set the good fruits standing out and speaking well of you: that intimidating was life's whirlwind but you pluck courage and withstood it; oh, flaming leaves of the almond tree!3
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Aww this is a cool and claming poem I love the flowers you put on the side I think the picture that is put by a poem should be carefuly looked at I think it helps make the poem good work and good luck in all your writes and all you do and thanks for the comment on my poem The Journey of an ant -
This is a good discription of autumn.. I really refreshing perpective. The discription you have used is well done and appropriate.
Well done, congratulations on gold, and Thanks for sharing this with us here at all poetry.
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I'm so glad this scored the gold. Congratulations!
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I do love autumn, its actually my favorite season of the year. But for some reason this want really my cup of tea..... it was more of a coffe for me :-P
It was good over all, It just wasnt my type
Keep up the good wrote.
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I absolutely loved this.I am pagan and it thrilled me to see someone write a nature piece.So eloquently worded.I adored the imagery and the comparisons.A very visual piece.Thanks so much for entering.
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
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Wonderful on so many levels. Good luck in the contest.
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passionate, and light at the same time... i met an almond tree once... there is milk in the fresh picked fruit of an almond
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This staory was amazing. You managed to talk about Autumn while actually it had another meaning besides that. A moral in a story. All in only 100 words. Good luck to you in the contest. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
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This has stunning imagery. Very beautifully worded and depicted. This is my absolute favorite time of the year. Great story! Good luck in the contest!
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Beautiful Story
This was a wonderful story . I love autumn, I live in the mountains of Pennsylvania, USA and the leaves are just beginning to turn. Your imagary is right out in my yard. Fantastic story..
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