Hate are my Talons

My hate are my talons
Pain my caress
Because of your crimes
My soul cannot rest1

Our dreams crushed
Our hearts torn
I will see you suffer
For the anguish we’ve borne2

Your eyes shalt bleed
For all the tears you sired
The core of your being
An everlasting pyre3

Your Nightmares unrolled
They all become truth
I have no forgiveness
For vermin like you4

Look up at my face
Recognise your death
You will see me smile
Before your last breath5

Your screams they ring out
Through darkness; through night
Like music to me
Fuelling anger-born might6

Your mind will be shattered
Your carcass shalt bathe
In blood and in spittle
Your eternal fate7

Your soul now destroyed
But at the cost of my own?
I haven’t the courage
My ambition undone8

Was it all worth it?
I’ve become such a fool
In the end you’ve still won
By turning me into you…

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  • Prodigious.Mirth gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    Was it all worth it?
    I’ve become such a fool
    In the end you’ve still won
    By turning me into you…

    know it sounds silly.... but the ending was the most powerfull words for me, why you might be after revenge and well vengence.... the fact that you succumb to being like another person must mean their is worser power at fate....


  • Naraku No Hana
    November 5, 2007

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    fantastic work here. Wow! You're so good at poetry! You're a natural! lol XD wonderful piece! I'm jealous


  • NotTheDroids
    October 23, 2007

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    Oh, wow! The curse of revenge, turning the soul of the person bent on revenge into darkness. I love this, it is so well written!


    • Evernight Prince
      October 23, 2007
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      Thanks for your comment. I imagine everyone ends up feeling somewhat like this at some point in their life. So figured it would be easy to relate to.

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