Poolside Affairs. 1
We swam under shade
And locked arms in cool waters.
You teased me
Bringing my bud to life
Inviting us to do more. 2
Now we are poolside3
As I ride you
Force your hand to my ass.
Don’t be gentle
When you squeeze my cheeks.
Let your nails sink in
Make me scream.4
Slide in your tool of love
Make sure I take every inch
and your reward is my
Muscles tightening around you.5
My voice sings out your name
Then I beg to feel
The full force of you
and your love.
Take me to new heights
And let us cum together.
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Did it paint the picture for you??
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descriptive but not really enough to paint a good picture.
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there we go.
this was good.
fav. part: We swam under shade
And locked arms in cool waters.
You teased me
Bringing my bud to life
Inviting us to do more.
&
Muscles tightening around you.
that line was an AWESOME line.
gj.
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there we go
Thanks gj
My natural gift for the most part lays within the erotica stylings
I try my best lol
I am glad you enjoyed this one
Cindy
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nice poem! I am a sucker for romance and emotion. great write- Keep it up! -Liz
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Wonderful poem. Shows such passion and emotions. It truly is very moving. Thank you for sharing it. Can't wait to read more.
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You did a great job on this, well worth the wait. I am not in poems that much, but I do read them, now and again.
This is one of the best I have read in a while. Not saying that because you got some of the guys in here a little hot...lol....
Great write.
Sarah.
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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Sarah
Aw thanks Sarah. And indeed a few guys are hot under the collar, never my intention of course
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Wow, extremely impressed - excellent read! Enough to make any human being feel a bit hot under the collar!
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Thank you
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Aw, shucks, flowers!
And I hardly know you! But seriously, you should write more of this. I see you are trying to get a novel published, why not preview it on here?
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I give roses to everyone, not that takes away form the sepcialness to you. They are always special, my roses hehehe
I will soon be putting it on here, I have been doing a lot of work on it and the editing
But thank you for the suggestion
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Will you please message me when you do - I'd love to read it!
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that picture and that prose mad me one very hot steamed up cheeky girl- thanks for the steaming read in all its wonderfull simplicity ...
Blair xoxox peace babe
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ma pleasure
Thanks babey girl
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