Songs of Sickening Sorrow

Sell sweet swaths of sickening sorrow, my silly sweetest Sally.
Sam should shoulder you, shield you should shame smile soon.
Singing sorrowful songs, I shall soon salute you, sweetest Sally and smartest Sam.

Author notes

For a contest, we were supposed to make a tongue-twister. Not so sure how well I did on this, but I might expand it into a story when the contest ends.

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  • Surreal Rhapsody
    November 4, 2007
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    That was really awsome!!!!!! It was fun to read, and really nicely worded!! ^.^


  • riasme
    October 22, 2007

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    sam and sally...i did my digestion project on those two!! nice tongue twister, i'll have to practice this one!!

    lise
    p.s. I'm on the school computer!!


  • hllykat
    October 22, 2007

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    Lovely! Nicely done.... this is the most poetic one so far... I encourage you to expand this. I love to see our youth writing. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!