How much (or little) can you take
before you go insane?
How long can you be ignored
and how short can they tear you down
before they give up
or you do?
It's a push and shove game,
one of us has to move,
but I intend to stay here
so please start walking.
Author notes
This is not supposed to be SUPER EMO or anything. I hope it didn't turn out that way...
It was actualy just me getting out the randomness. Shake it out!
Wow. It's been a long time since I've added stuff on here. Don't break my heart kids.
Comments
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I haven't been on here forever, but I still see you're writing good poetry! I definately think that you should make it longer, if you can. Also, it does not sound super Emo at all. In the last stanza I don't think that it flows very well. Mainly because you have such a strong attitude, then you ask nicely for whoever it is to leave. Anyways, I liked it! :
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I like it. It's really nice. You could lengthen it a bit more. I really like the second/last stanza. It makes me happy. :]
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I'll try to keep your heart whole. I like it a lot. If you added more to this, it could probably turn into a gooey love poem.
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