My best friend is someone,1
Someone who looks me through,2
My best friend is honest,3
So honest that no lies will accost to you.4
My best friend is so sweet,5
Sweeter than a pie,6
My mom will always say,7
"you're the sweetest, no lie!"8
My best friend is true,9
True as the deep blue,10
Will never in there life,11
ever ignore you,12
Author notes
This is not done but tell me what you think anyway!
In a list
A contest entry
- Poems... by Surreal Rhapsody.
100 points, ended November 26, 2007, 18 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Amazing Poetry Contest(ENTER) by Melissa Loves Jeffy.
225 points, ended November 19, 2007, 15 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what you think please
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Aww! That's a good friend to you! Anyways good job, I guess.
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nice poem but im sorry i hate hannah montanna
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This is good but a bit rushed through. I like the idea and the structur. you should build up your vocabulary and put mre intellectual words in your poetry. good luck in the contest
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owh...it's so sweet.simple but very meanigful.i love the flow of this piece.you should give this to your best friend.If i received a poem like this,i will be choked up.and there will be tears. hehe!
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Wargh
I liked it, so sweet.
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hehe it's very sweet! I have friends who I think of the same way, which is good because well it makes your poem east to relate to which is good I love poetry. This is good, really great.
Cat
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I really think that this poem is really good!!!! Great job! IT had a nice rythem to it and it was really was happy. ^.^
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This is good, you know my friend crystal wrote me two best friend poems, i promise you she is so sweet,can't wait to read more!
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