chorus
There are monsters in the dark,
'round the corners of my heart.
who scare me when i look into their faces.
sore and open wounds,gaping wide
hide bitter feelings deep inside
so i see their disapointed faces.
keep moving,dont slow down,
keep my feet on the ground
forever treading in my places.
put my shoulder in it,
and add another brick to the braces
verse 1
run but dont hide
your still alive
take a deep breath
steady your beating heart
dont look down
keep on climbing
till you can grab the sky
stumble but dont fall
there's no one to catch you
no one at all
(chorus)1 verse 2
spread your broken wings
reach for the sun
bright light to engulf you
chase away the monsters
back into the dark
vanquished into nothingness
your safe.you never
have to use your eyes
full of lucidity
floating in stupidity
no more screaming
no more crying
its all a lie!
open your eyes!
light is dark
your thrown upside down
and around and around
crashing back to earth
all your problems surround
overwelming all your senses
you spread your wings
you try to fly
flipping end over end
time is nonexistent
no light
no dark
no right
no wrong
all there is is an empty void
nothingness radiates from all around
whats left for you,
except to pull yourself out of this whole
that you've stumbled into? 2
what do you think? what are your views? i want the good the bad and the ugly!please?!
Comments
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I don't know whether Ennio Morricone could pen a tune to this, but it was worth reading. I liked the first 6 lines the most.
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This could use some revising, but besides that, I think you have a pretty good song right here. I think you could make this a good song if you only revised some of the words and made it into more verses, cause it seems jumbled up in places.
Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more from you.
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