For several years I put up with the hell you put me through.1
Everyday I'd come to school, knowing that torture awaits.2
Returning home in tears. I just got more and more depressed.3
Well you have pushed me over the edge. And today it's my turn to torture you. I come to school with a gun and two thousand bullets. Will I be forced to use them all? God only knows. I don't know anymore what I am capable of. Because the devil has taken my mind over too much. You are now at his mercy. Mercy ha ha that's funny. Anyway, I lock the doors and cover the windows with dark black cloth. Black is my favorite color now. Funny, it used to be purple. People are getting scared now. Before I can pull out all the phones from the wall, some one calls the cops. "Damn you! Your first in line. I want everyone to go into the room that I tell you to." I say. I separated the ones that will live from the ones that will suffer. " Stacey please don't do this. I thought you were a good student!" Mrs. Bull says. " Everyone shut up!" I yelled. People are starting to cry now. " You guys have nothing to worry about, unless you decided to cross me today that is. Just sit here and whatever you do, don't scream or leave this room." I said to the people in the safe room. A cell phone rings. " Stacey take it. You will want to talk to these people." Mrs. Good said. " What!" I said, as I answered the phone. " Stacey this is Stan from the police department. What's going on?" The idiot asked. " Nothing at all." I said. " You and I both know that you have a lot of hostages in there with you. Do you have any demands?" Stan asked. " Yeah I do Stan. I want them to say they are sorry!" I yelled, as I hung up. Now back to the game. " Charlie, come forward." I said. Charlie came out of the room. He is shaking and is pale. " Aww what's the matter Charlie? Not such a big man in front of a gun?" I teased. " What are you going to do to me." He asked, in an unstable voice. " Well that all depends on you. Say you're sorry and make me believe you. Or you die. Simple enough for you or do I need to spell it out for you?" I asked. " I am really really sorry Stacie. I never meant to hurt you. Please let me go. I want to be friends with you now." I think about it for a minute and let me sweat it out. " Go. Get out of here and join the others in the safe room. You're forgiven." I said. He ran into the room as fast as he could. "Next!" I yelled. Andie came out. " Ah Andie. Let's here it." I said. " Sorry." He said. " Not good enough!" I yelled. (BANG!) (Andie struggles) " You shot me. I can't believe you shot me. Stacey, I'm not going to make it. I'm dying." He tries to say. (Andie gasps for air a few times.) He starts to shake, and the he dies. The fear in his eyes to an evil person like me was a reward. Eight hundred more people died that day. It took them a year to clean up the mess. I am now sitting in prison, planning my next revenge. Because I have been pushed over the edge.4
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I MADE ONE MISTAKE THOUGH IN THIS. MAN LOL. IT WAS SUPPOSED TO SAY, "LET HIM SWEAT IT OUT." NOT "LET ME SWEAT IT OUT."
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AWW THANK YOU BLACKROSE FOR THE COMMENT AND APPLAUD! THATS SO SWEET.
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Awsome!
0_0! woah. Lot of emotion. I can relate to it. Awsome write. LOVE IT!! Also, thanxz for the comment on my poem. returnng the favor.. =) -
THANK YOU FOR ALL THE APPLAUSES AND COMMENTS. MAKES ME FEEL GOOD TO KNOW THAT YOU ENJOY MY POETRY.
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Wow, you really let your emotions go with this. As i read it I can almost feel the emtion. I love this peace. Keep writing this stuff.
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thank you tigerlady. I am actualy angry lol. I didnt think this story went through. so glad it did. Thought I deleted it. ANyway thanks for the comment.
Its peo;ple like you that encourage me to keep on writting.
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woah........ very powerful .. u sound so angry . love it !!!
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